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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-17 01:29 PM


~Pure Love~


~pure~        ~love~
that   came  from   above
a  touch  that  flew  into  me
granting me love’s sanctity
I found peace within you
I found hope living too
I found love’s liberty
so now I’m free
love pure
love


~this~          ~beat~
that    burns     with    heat
calls  forth  the  essence  of  me  
summons   my  soul  to  fly  free
I   yield   to   passions   flame
hear  it  calling  my   name
there  deep  within  me
flame burns brightly
bathes my skin
and within
is pure
love


Marsha





To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-17-2002 01:35 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-17 01:35 PM




(smiles) BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words never cease to amaze me, sweet friend, I just love how you always try new forms and you always do them so wonderfully! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-17 02:26 PM



Ok, so now I want a four leaf clover...

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3 posted 2002-03-17 02:30 PM


hey sweetie, this is a beauty!
very creative too
You are a fine poet indeed

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4 posted 2002-03-17 02:38 PM


Marsha, this is so beautiful and very creative!  Yes, can you do a four leaf clover?  
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-03-17 02:56 PM


O  My! I goofed!

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6 posted 2002-03-17 02:59 PM


O      I
truly adore
you, darling girl
sweet words of honey
pure as gold telling us,
we poets, our poetry's fine
I found peace through you
I found hope living too
I found love’s liberty
You help free me
with pure love
from
U

I love you, Mushy! xo

((Marsha))
-newell
                          


Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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7 posted 2002-03-17 03:33 PM


Marsha, I love poems of pure heart..and here you even doubled the pleasure read *s

hugss
M

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8 posted 2002-03-17 10:05 PM


Very nice Marsha...James
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9 posted 2002-03-17 10:07 PM



Very creative with wonderful thoughts.  I love these!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2002-03-17 10:10 PM


MarshaLove~
Someone has 'simonized' your heart~
LOVE this one ....
Tee-Hee ... remember the first WONKY shape ???
LOVE how you've 'connected' ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2002-03-17 10:10 PM


Well done! Fire in the words that glisten on these hearts... ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2002-03-17 10:24 PM


Marsha.....all I can say is WOW!!!!!!!!!
What UNBELIEVABLE talent you have.
   lots of sweet hugggssss!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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13 posted 2002-03-17 10:47 PM


Very lovely Marsha...nicely done..i will have to try and get more creative one of these days ha..hugss

                                     ~Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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14 posted 2002-03-17 10:51 PM


Marsha ... this is delightful!  Beautifully composed in both phrasing and sentiment, very much enjoyed your presentation in full!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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15 posted 2002-03-18 03:02 AM


My word! Creativity is running rampant in the whole family!!

Your poetry is in fine shape, mushy lady. Fitting that your poetry should take the shape of hearts since you are such a large part of the heart of Passions....or were those apples?

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16 posted 2002-03-18 08:00 PM


Sis,

this is stunning work! i love how
you put it into the shape of a heart...
you are awesome dear...but then again
you always are! I LOVED THIS!! take care
and i'll speak to you soon.

love you.
amy  

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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17 posted 2002-03-18 11:17 PM


Marsha~

this is sooooo Lovely!!!! I love the shapes, I am still working on mine...LOL I am a slow learner.....very very lovely!!!


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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18 posted 2002-03-23 05:53 PM


Noah darling boy thank you so very much I’m pleased you like it, I’ve not done two hearts before. I’m pleased it worked


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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19 posted 2002-03-23 05:55 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart a four leaf clover I couldn’t do it the spacing wasn’t right, and I wasn’t skilled enough to do it. Never mind darling heart you can do the next one, I challenge you. Do you know I feel sure you could


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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20 posted 2002-03-23 05:56 PM


Joanna darling girl thank you muchly I’m glad you like it, I enjoyed doing them.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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21 posted 2002-03-23 06:11 PM


Nancy darling girl no I can’t do four leaf clovers, one day maybe I might be able to do them. Thank you so much, you are always a delight to see on my posts


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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22 posted 2002-03-23 06:14 PM


Newell darling boy thank you muchly that is a lovely poem I greatly appreciate it as I appreciate you thank you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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23 posted 2002-03-23 06:15 PM


Maureen darling girl thank you very very much I really appreciate you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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James darling boy thank you I really do appreciate you taking the time to read and reply

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Melissa darling girl Thank you so much I can’t tell you how special your reply is to me, I adore your writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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27 posted 2002-03-23 06:31 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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28 posted 2002-03-23 06:39 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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This Diamond darling  Thank you so much that is truly appreciated


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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30 posted 2002-03-23 06:40 PM


Lyra darling girl thank you for that wow but it’s not that difficult to do. If you want spectacular you should see Keth’s dragonfly now that is worth a wow.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Only you sweet sis of my soul could write something so very lovely
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