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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Within or Without A touch of Venus makes me shout this golden seal is much too tight I cannot sing here tonight A warm embrace conceils seduction's smirk Supreme lovers stoic deceiving Fervid etheral Desires Dusk comes languid to those in the distance i can not sing tonight |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is a haunting but beautiful poem, sweet friend, it too saddens me to see lovers taken advantage of by another rather than both loving unconditionally and faithfully, being a victim of seduction! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Manisha you are such a wonderful person, dont be discouraged by your inability to percieve the truth of others, you blithering idiot! (hahahahaha);-p God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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