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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-03-17 02:34 AM



"Ibn Abbad taught that it is in the night of desolation that the door to mystical union is secretly opened though it remains tightly closed during the day of understanding and light." T.Merton

Who better than yourself
do you know?....the Truth!
Feel the caboose,
drawing...winding...
like a rubberband.
You glued to dry land......Mark Coburn

© Copyright 2002 Mark Coburn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-17 03:32 AM


Wow, Mark! I really like this. So ponderful.
Spread your wings and fly...leave behind the dry (land.)  

Mark Coburn
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2 posted 2002-03-17 04:02 AM


Midnitesun..if I look deep enough
a pale powder blue
ends the extreme.........mc

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3 posted 2002-03-17 08:36 AM



I find both the poem, and the response, to be very interesting...

write more

Mark Coburn
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4 posted 2002-03-17 09:12 AM


sunshine.....given second chance
world revolving.....turning
I began....to dance..........mark

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5 posted 2002-03-17 12:45 PM


maaaaaarrrrrrk!!!!!!!

your truths are shining
in the sky again!

lovely!!!


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6 posted 2002-03-17 01:01 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is a wonderful esoteric view, sweet friend, your words always amaze us all and have us thinking! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have sucha  beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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