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mirror man
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0 posted 2002-03-17 02:10 AM








mon poème


Et mon poème
vous remuerait-il
vous s'avancer ici
me donner une gifle,
être mêlé,
baiser mon cerveau?

Ceci n'est pas une erreur.
Vous ne vous abusez.
Je parle à vous
ma petite poulette,
mon beau chat,
mon chirurgien poétique,
ma gardienne du jardin,
ma mama ooo-la!

Je parle à vous.
Vous vous avancez et jouez.
Je vous veux
mais je n'ai besoin de vous.

Vous voulez parler?
Vous vous avancez et jouez.

copyright 2002





[This message has been edited by mirror man (03-17-2002 09:45 PM).]

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Temptress
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1 posted 2002-03-17 02:20 AM


Ummm..I have to say it was interesting, but I'm not sure i get it at all? Seems to be a little silly? Am I missing something? I have been with very dull wits tonight. *sigh*

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

mirror man
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2 posted 2002-03-17 02:27 AM


Temptress -- no, you're not missing anything.  This is just a poem.  And yes, it is silly.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (03-17-2002 03:23 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-03-17 03:26 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, this poem is soooooo delightfully funny, sweet friend, your words are always so intriguing to read! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mirror man
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4 posted 2002-03-17 09:08 PM


Thank you, Noah.  Oh, what I said!  Ha, ha.  Personally, I think it's better without the translator.  Ha, ha, ha.

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