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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-03-17 12:39 PM



Elusive


Evasive prince
you touch my very depth
with insatiable dreams of fairytale
leaving me with only an ache for my heart
of love I've waited to hold for so long;
but, I must remember
that the doorway to heaven
is also the gate to hell
of fate's elusive kiss

By Melissa P. Monette


© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2002-03-17 12:46 PM


that the doorway to heaven
is also the gate to hell
of fate's elusive kiss

Wowser, thank you very much!!  

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-17-2002 12:46 AM).]

Tracey
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2 posted 2002-03-17 12:46 PM


Wow, that’s quite the twist you put in the end there. I wasn’t expecting it. Love it Melissa.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2002-03-17 12:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you for I believe all lovers can relate to this kind of fate, but deep down with all my hearg as long as you believe in yourself and where you are going, heaven is where you're destined to be taken to with your love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-18 03:42 PM


the double-edged sword eh???

well done. . . excellent in form. . .

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5 posted 2002-03-18 04:26 PM


Melissa,

  *sighs* I could read your stuff all day! I love this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2002-03-18 05:43 PM


much said in very few words
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7 posted 2002-03-18 08:12 PM


Melissa, again, you express my thoughts perfectly.
Enjoyed, though its a subject that still hurts.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-03-18 08:24 PM


Great write Melissa!!  Love the ending!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2002-03-18 09:15 PM


Mellisa,
Good writing, enjoyed the read.

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10 posted 2002-03-18 09:28 PM


Words of wisdom, Melissa.  Nice writing!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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11 posted 2002-03-18 09:40 PM


When you open the door and feel the heat, you know where you are!

This is excellent writing, patootie lady

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