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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-16 09:19 PM



Tell me, tell me more... whispered softly he said
Of the canyons and valleys, and the sunsets so red
Did you say, tell me more... in her questioning eyes
Of the diamonds and night sky, all a velvet surprise

Tell me, tell me more... the enchantment so deep
Of sudden call coming, in the thoughts that we keep
Did you say, tell me more... in her voice oh so soft
Of the high points and peaks, on the wing so aloft

Tell me, tell me more... his eyes searched every word
Of the highlights and low points, of the music she heard
Did you say, tell me more... as she reached for his hand
Of the miles on the beaches, all the dreams I once planned

Tell me, tell me this... as he moved into reach
Of the scents and the flavors in each lipped long soft speech
Did you say, tell me this... with a smile let him in
Of the deepest sweet kiss, and pure bliss to begin

Copyright Kkh 3/16/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-03-16 09:24 PM


Tell me, tell me more... his eyes searched every word
Of the highlights and low points, of the music she heard
Did you say, tell me more... as she reached for his hand
Of the miles on the beaches, all the dreams I once planned

This is incredible!

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2 posted 2002-03-16 09:40 PM


OH YES!....I do like this poem...and the
way the thoughts were shown.....VERY NICE!!!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-03-16 09:48 PM


Enjoyed this poem..James
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4 posted 2002-03-16 10:41 PM


This is intensely beautiful. Made me hold my breath as I read it.
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5 posted 2002-03-17 03:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it always makes me smile just imagining how much magic a single kiss can offer and how much it can say! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-17 03:59 PM



Heard this whispering to me, so had to come take a peek...me liking this one, very, very much...

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7 posted 2002-03-17 04:03 PM


This is exquisite!  Love the way is sounds read aloud  Beautiful and lilting.  
Enjoyed much....
Hugs, Nancy.

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-03-17 07:50 PM


Thank you everyone...

The way people relate can be very beautiful... wishing you all big smiles and warm spring days. ThisDiamond

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