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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-03-16 04:26 PM

We’ve woken from the dream
mid dance
this love forever
what I leave you
here
upon my sleeve
it remains
you are still
my poetry

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-03-16 04:27 PM

Just make sure it is stitched on tight...a soft, tender write, Duncan...

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2002-03-16 05:04 PM

Beautiful.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-03-16 05:18 PM

Duncan - soft and lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-16 06:04 PM

Duncan my oh my, this is so charming. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-16 06:09 PM

As it should be Duncan, very beautifully
said...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-03-16 06:48 PM

We’ve woken from the dream
mid dance
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Gee don't ya just hate when this happens?
Just kidding Duncan....this is so tenderly penned.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-16 07:57 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever sing poetry to your heart and dance with you for all eternity! (big hugggsssss) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2002-03-16 08:31 PM

My poet you will always be
In thoughts that echo silently
In moonbeams shining on the sky
There is no rhyme or reason why
The dream that hovers in the stars
Though fleeting, once that dream was ours
And when I see a star above
Remember wishing it for love
In winter keeping flames afire
Of love once climbing ever higher
And should you ever think of me
I hope there is a smile to see

Thank you Duncan. I hope you don’t mind, but it brought back my stubborn, silent muse for a moment.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-03-16 09:23 PM

"you are still
my poetry"

Cowboy
you keep making me cry

(I love this)

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

10 posted 2002-03-16 09:29 PM

Duncan,

I love the last two lines

So sweet.. you can always make me smile

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-03-16 09:45 PM

"You are still my poetry"...really like this line...James

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-03-16 09:45 PM

this love forever
what I leave you
here
upon my sleeve
======================
you are still
my poetry
======================

*swooning here*
and then
*sighing* at Tracys very appropriate reply..
and then...
*smiling at the both of you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2002-03-16 11:44 PM

Love written in poetry never dies.
And it never lies.
Even if it falls apart,
it is still beating
in the heart.
And I am still
hugging both hearts.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-03-16 11:50 PM

Duncan~

Lovely, and I agree with everyone the last two lines are so tender....be well...Peace

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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