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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-16 11:53 AM

Life, at 20 words

Seeds
Did not choose
Which wind’s breath
To fly upon

But took lift
To live life
In my lawn

Dandylioning….

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2002-03-16 11:57 AM

Thanks for the giggle.

Enjoyed!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

2 posted 2002-03-16 12:00 PM

Karilea - Quite amusing. Those dandelions sure have some nerve thinking they can live anywhere they want.lol

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-16 12:00 PM

Sunshine,
Clever, enjoyed.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-03-16 12:23 PM

i can tell you are a good gardener ha..they wont be there for long..hug..nicely done

~Victoria~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-16 01:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this feels just like Mother Nature spring cleaning, spreading the seeds of life to all our lawns, and then there are those little dust-bunnies, those weeds! (giggles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-03-16 02:03 PM

Sun,
Thanks for the smile.Will help to make me through the day.

Peaches

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-16 02:07 PM

OH WOW! Now isn't this creative! Love it Karilea. Excellent. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-03-16 02:14 PM

What a cute bit of fluff

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2002-03-16 02:36 PM

The flower of childhood...love it!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-03-16 02:41 PM

hahaha SUNSHINE My husband will love this poem. He is forever out there picking those things and I bring them in and put them in a glass on the table and he comes in and gets angry. He says " I dont want to see another one of those things" but hey, I like them. they are pretty, and my dad used to make wine out of them. LOL..nice nice write, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-03-16 02:42 PM

Soooo, that is what those pesky critters
look like....

Nice one KJ...well done!

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