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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-03-16 07:58 AM

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        Travel Intrigue

The intrigue of pictorials,
Cinderella attire
Offered in subliminal form
Sets desire on fire.

Transference lulls a glitzy sleep.
Moonlit figures dance ballet.
Tittering wink and champagne drink,
Lures you into interplay.

Veiled within surreptitiousness,
Flirtatious syrupy water.
Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp,
Makes for a heady mortar.

Vivacious waiting elegance.
Promised tete-a-tete so sweet,
Page and page of dream on dream,
Harvesting your thoughts' complete.

To guest or not to guest the theme.
There is no question but a scheme.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-16 08:02 AM

Invite me, come; ask me, stay;
tell me, leave! and go your way...
that I spent a moment with you
made me a keepsake memory or two...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-16 08:04 AM

Sunshine,
Now that is a ray of sunshine.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-16 08:22 AM

Seymour darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception.

Wonderful flow and rhythm, as you seem to always do you’ve painted the picture to PERFECTION. You write so perfectly

Call me into dreams with you
A dancing dream just for two
Spin the dream into a song
Come and dance all night long
Dreams confection spinning free
Won’t you dream dance with me?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-16 08:27 AM

Marsha,
You always write the perfect comment.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-03-16 08:58 AM

Transference lulls a glitzy sleep.
Moonlit figures dance ballet.
Tittering wink and champagne drink,
Lures you into interplay.

Veiled within surreptitiousness,
Flirtatious syrupy water.
Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp,
Makes for a heady mortar.

Vivacious waiting elegance.
Promised tete-a-tete so sweet,
===================================
To guest or not to guest the theme.
There is no question but a scheme.
====================================

You must have the same travel agent me moody muse uses when she takes off without me

love the clever word play and rhyme scheme theme here me Stinky love...

"Flirtatious syrupy water.
Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp"

you were talking bout raspberry tea here werent you

Lets book a cruise on the Love Boat sailing on the Raspberry Sea..Randy can be the Capt. LOL

*winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-03-16 09:59 AM

JM,
I'll bring the sugar
You bring the tea.
And we'll head out to sea.
Winkiewinkie Randy stinky.

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

7 posted 2002-03-16 10:24 AM

Seymour hi there this is such a dreamy poem. I like this it is so descriptive or those dreaming moments.

Well written you really are an excellent writer

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-03-16 11:32 AM

Krissy,

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-16 02:39 PM

(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooo delightful, I know this feeling so very well, there is no feeling more dazzling than travelling in dreams and finding the many suprises that await! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-03-16 02:41 PM

Thank you Noah for the read and comment.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-16 02:44 PM

i love this Seymour I thought it to be so charming, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-03-16 02:50 PM

Enjoyed Sy..a lovely read..

nicely penned

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-03-16 07:38 PM

Thank you Floria.

And thank you Victoria

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