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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-15 11:24 PM




Awaken in the glaze elusiveness
Fever, deep and dry conclusiveness
Open in the moist night air to quench
Awaken in a pool of raindrops drench

Struggle to the feet and footing fleet
Wide-eyed and confusion pensively meet
Open in the moist night air to gasp
Awaken in the after once now passed

Gaining of the concept and forces wild
Fever of the blood entrance beguiled
Open in the moist night air to shine
Awaken in the freedom of another time

Copyright Kkh 3/15/02


© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-16 08:42 AM



Aye...to know there are other times to be relived...enjoyed this one!

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2 posted 2002-03-16 11:09 AM


Dreams do bring us back to memories past.  Nicely done.

Dave

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3 posted 2002-03-16 03:08 PM




(smiles) This is a wonderful expression of revisiting the visions of yesterday and incorporating them with modern emotions, sweet friend, this poem spins with such sincere thoughts! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-19 10:56 PM


ThisDiamond~

'Struggle to the feet and footing fleet
Wide-eyed and confusion pensively meet
Open in the moist night air to gasp
Awaken in the after once now passed'


PERFECT !
I awaken nightly to the dance of muses through my dreams~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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