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Martie
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0 posted 2002-03-15 08:07 PM


Knock Knock

Now my day so sent
across the miles with words
some bent yet bloom intent to color
at the door of what for

will you listen then and take my hand
for I speak what is inside
of me so unsure at times of glance
that seems to take me in
but chance is life just waiting for
someone to open up the door

to pour something worthwhile a smile
to stay awhile and catch the evening breeze
that floats across each life such need
that blossom spring with breathing in
and exhale what is friendship seeds

Knock knock

© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-15 08:08 PM



If you get tired knocking,
try the doorbell...

I'll answer!

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2 posted 2002-03-15 08:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, your gorgeous words always blossom with the whispers of friendship, sweet friend, this is a lovely and affectionate piece, knock knock! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a beautifully delightful verse, you are so much fun to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-15 08:12 PM


Who's There?
Why it's Martie!!
Please come in and we'll have tea.
This is lovely sweet lady.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-03-15 08:18 PM


another beauty Martie *s

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5 posted 2002-03-15 08:30 PM


Another lovely write Martie. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-03-15 09:39 PM


Oh yes, Now Martie this one I especially love, it is wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-03-15 11:21 PM


Knock! Knock!
Who's there?
Martie
Martie who?
Martiriffic poetry from you!!!

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8 posted 2002-03-15 11:59 PM


I could think of nothing I'd rather do,
than share friendship seeds with you

One day soon Martie!

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9 posted 2002-03-16 12:07 PM


Lovely words Martie..truly enjoyed...hugs

           ~Victoria

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10 posted 2002-03-16 12:26 PM


friendship like this is so much more... your words are incredibly wonderful.....

you know i have always loved your writing...

very nicely done

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11 posted 2002-03-19 10:51 PM


MartieSis~

'but chance is life just waiting for
someone to open up the door'


'Backdoor friends are special ... it's open, come on in'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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