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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-15 07:52 PM




Deja Vu
By: Noah Eaton
3/15/02

You make my heart sing
Sweet Joanna
Like a music box
Falling in love with you again
Everyday
Deja vu...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-15-2002 07:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-15 08:00 PM


i love this...hugss..wonderful

        ~Vic

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2 posted 2002-03-15 08:03 PM


Beautiful Noah!!  Isn't this fun??!!  YAY!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-03-15 08:08 PM


I love this, Noah!

((Noah))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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4 posted 2002-03-15 08:20 PM


very sweet, Noah
*s
M

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5 posted 2002-03-15 08:21 PM


noah-

wowow my sweet friend...this was
awesome...i just had to read something
with the title deja vu...but this
was really wonderful writing!

take care.
amy

p.s. your joanna is very lucky!

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-03-15 08:22 PM


Sweet !!! hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-03-15 08:42 PM



Awwwwww! This is so sweet!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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8 posted 2002-03-15 08:45 PM



Noah...this is lovely...

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9 posted 2002-03-15 08:47 PM


Noah...something tells me SHE KNOWS...

Nicely done...

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10 posted 2002-03-15 09:29 PM


And this music box plays wonderful music, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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11 posted 2002-03-15 10:10 PM


it's your heart singing to me
what a wonderful little poem!

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12 posted 2002-03-16 04:24 PM


Message to Joanna..PLEASE make that trip
Luv this, Noah.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-03-16 04:45 PM



Everyday
Deja vu...

What a day it is, Noah!

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