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Balladeer
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0 posted 03-15-2002 07:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer



I said, "I'm broke,
I must confess.
What have you got
For twenty or less?"

She gave me the bird...

© Copyright 2002 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 03-15-2002 07:41 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH OH MY OH MY....FLORIA

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Duncan
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2 posted 03-15-2002 07:41 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Humor!!  Thank you, Balladeer.  I needed that.
Magnus
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3 posted 03-15-2002 07:42 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

AWWWWW, come on Michael...surely you have
more than 20 bucks???  LOVED THIS ONE>>>
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 03-15-2002 07:42 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Michael!  You take first prize with this one!
Excellent...hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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City of Roses


5 posted 03-15-2002 07:44 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo wonderfully delightful, sweet friend, I love birds soooooo much, what a gorgeous gift! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVISSIMO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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LOL Ok you've got my vote for best 20 or less! I'll give you a kiss on the cheek for FREE *muah*
Ooops got lipstick on ya lol
Aimster
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7 posted 03-15-2002 07:45 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Ok Michael

YOU WIN!!! this was a riot...i always
enjoying your writing be it one of your
deeper love ballads or something comical
of this nature..you rock either way!!
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

doreen peri
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8 posted 03-15-2002 07:48 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

LOL!!!!!!



you are the funniest
poet in the whole world

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


9 posted 03-15-2002 07:50 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

haa yes, that was  cute.

M
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10 posted 03-15-2002 07:51 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

she knew you had a hundred..thats why she gave you the bird haa..

           ~Victoria~
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Listening to every heart


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'DEER!!!!
Martie
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12 posted 03-15-2002 07:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Michael

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13 posted 03-15-2002 08:22 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

’Deer dearest heart oh good grief, this is sooooooooooo funny, I keep seeing these twenty or less poems My replies aren’t under twenty words, how do you do it. That amazes me.

You have 20? 20 for what?
20 won’t get you nice and hot
20 will only get you tepid at best
20 is nothing where’s the rest
20 dollars we’re talking here
Not even enough to pay for beer
20 won’t pay for dinner you know
What else would it be…..
Some kind of show?

Well look here I’m an innocent maiden Stop snickering you lot I’m almost a maiden and almost innocent. Almost……..

As always this is brilliant writing I really love this lots of giggling here. Thank you today I need a smile and this definitely gave me one.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

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just out of reach


14 posted 03-15-2002 08:24 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

ROFL !!!!!!!! good one!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 03-15-2002 08:27 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Imperial laughter!
Did you get change? ThisDiamond
Balladeer
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16 posted 03-15-2002 10:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

floria...I love your laugh!!

duncan..hehe..glad I wuz there for ya

magnus...a deer and his bucks are soon parted

Enchantress...I accept!! Thank you!

Noah...you're a rare bird yourself! Thanks for the smile!

RosePetal...I would wear your lipstick as a badge of honor!

amy...you are so kind to me...(hugs)))

Doreen..I love to put a smile on your face..

Maureen...thank you for the cute!

Victoria...yeah, but she wasn't worth it!!

Sunshine...don't spank me! On the other hand....

Martie....hehe...I can imagine your tone..

Mushy....hey..twenty would have gotten me Manhatten Island at one point!!

Chris....glad it made you laugh!!

Diamond....I should have!!! Thanks for the royal smile
Kit McCallum
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17 posted 03-15-2002 11:05 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

ROFL!!!  

Only you Michael, only you, lol.

Best wishes and thanks for the grins,
Kit
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18 posted 03-15-2002 11:12 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Michael,

   LOL!!!!!! I love this! *giggles and giggles*

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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19 posted 03-15-2002 11:22 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

a Walmart poem!
Larry C
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Balladeer,
Your twenty will get ya' more at Kmart!
SEA
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with you


21 posted 03-15-2002 11:46 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

silliness tonight is a good thing
thanks for this one
amigo
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22 posted 03-16-2002 01:23 AM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amigo

hohoho...this is it, Michael dear....thanks for the smile...
Krissy
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23 posted 03-16-2002 09:43 AM       View Profile for Krissy   Email Krissy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krissy

’Deer hi there Oh I really needed this today, actually I needed this last night. Mum read it to me and it helped no end. Thank you for the much-needed lift.

’Deer made me smile
Which banished tears
Brought laughter instead
You are smiles better than
A cuppa or chocolate


Is that how they are done? My first 20 or less


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 03-16-2002 09:47 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
It looks to me like you were lucky.
 
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