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All Wrong |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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All Wrong AMK 3/15/02 What is this game you play "friend" This tearing at my heart You and I said goodbye long ago So now after all this time what do you want? You and I were as one once upon a time But you forget...you are the one that let me go Your constant games of the heart Surely you knew it would end...you had to know One minute you wanted me The next it was like you were pushing me away But still you claim that you've always wanted me That you still have words left to say Well I am done talking I gave you the best parts of me I loved you with all that I had But I moved on, and am now free So please if you ever loved me Just leave me be once and for all Forget the moments we had together My name I no longer want you to call I'm in love with someone else She is where my heart now belongs Just stop whatever you are trying to do This feels all wrong "just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Amy, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know how hard it must be to say something like this, but once we say how we really feel, then we will find much more comfort in the long run and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wow..sure is nice when you know your own mind isn't it...I wonder how much yo-yoing a relationship can take. hugss M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
m, you've given me something to ponder. thank you m'friend. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
~A~ gosh have i lived this on both sides. So hard to just dismiss the deepest of feelings. Healing has to start that way, tho. Why does it mainly feel like pain, tho? sigh......Your words have feeling-arrows that pierce deeply. jKF |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Well I am done talking I gave you the best parts of me I loved you with all that I had But I moved on, and am now free" Yeah damnit! she loves someone else now, back off!!! (hee hee, I got yer back Amy  )ok, now really, I love the go bugger off tone of this, Amy your poetry is so fantastic, I really enjoy reading you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good stuff here Amy! Feels good to get it all out huh? Hugs! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, This is such a hard situation, I wish you luck. It feels great though to get it out Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your poem is one I bet a lot of people can relate to, but I am killing myself laughing at Sea's comment to you, as I was thinking it, but she says it The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's not easy to come to terms with these feelings you write of. In time we learn to break free of the ties that bind us... setting ourselves free to fly again. So very nicely said and done. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Breaking free is never easy...Just the thought of it can be agonizing.... It has to be looked at as a learning experience...not just love or emotions... Easy to say... You penned this well...very well... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Isn’t that always the way huh? They don’t want you, til they haven’t got you. Then they want you back. hrmph, enough to make you feel like a dog chasing it’s tail!! Mind you, it’s so much easier not to fall for it, when you have real love in your life. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I remember this place very well...when you finally set yourself free from the burdens of an unfulfilling relationship and place your trust and hopes in the present...James |
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