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Open Poetry #19

Spirits United (CHOKA)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-03-15 12:54 PM

Spirits United (Choka)

Your heart touches me
with tender simplicity.
I'm lost in your love
a gift from heaven above.
Paint my world with you
in pallets of loving hue.
Peace rains down on me
together we'll always be.

Spirits united as one.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-15-2002 12:55 PM).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-03-15 01:25 PM

Very nicely done,
You took the form and molded it with your emotion
Showing your talent of expression.

Gloom

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-03-15 06:10 PM

This is very pretty....
Connie

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-03-15 06:38 PM

Yes you did a wonderful job, Donna
As Always
Maureen

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-15 06:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile, this is a beauitufl choka! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your spirit forever dance with his in loves enchantment! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!