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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-03-15 12:29 PM

Life Is Bizarre.

How far is bizarre?
How many uneven steps
‘till I cross that fine line
between what seems normal
and what seems bizarre?
Or did I already
crossover
without realizing
I was gone?
Life.
Sometimes it pulls me
against myself,
like taffy.
How far can I stretch
before I break?
How much sewage can I smell
before I retch?
How far is bizarre?
When do you know
you’ve gone too far
to get back to the middle?
Do you even want to go revisit
the same point twice?
Stretch me.
Bend me,
spend my soul,
waste my heartbeat,
tear it apart
under careless
stomping feet.
How far to bizarre?
Life is bizarre.
But no matter
how bizarre it gets,
I can’t seem
to live
without it.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-15 12:39 PM

Midnitesun,
You visit the bizarre, you don't stay there.
Enjoyed the write.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-03-15 12:42 PM

Kacy,
The septic is backed up eh!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-03-15 12:47 PM

*sigh* That's a great reply.

Larry, LOL, it's beyond the point of "no return."

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2002-03-15 01:28 PM

Oh, you really wrote of this perfectly! It's amost like you knew my thoughts today. Excellent write here and I enjoyed this. Cool title also!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

5 posted 2002-03-15 01:54 PM

Wow, now that was totally Bizarre! *LOL* Just kidding! I liked the way it coiled around just touching the bases and then skirted itself back home again. Yep, what would life be like without it? *LOL* Loved it.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-03-15 02:02 PM

I don't think I've read anything I relate so much to as this! How bizarre, how bizarre. Love it, Kacy!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-15 02:26 PM

Kacy, THIS is Bizarre!!
And, I love bizarre!
I also love life!
So there you go!
Good stuff here....Hugs, Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-03-15 03:05 PM

Bizarre is my life
as lightning in a snow storm
never to see sun

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-15 03:21 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, it is such a wonderful feeling to always live life on the wild side, for embracing the world with a smile will always fill our hearts needs! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2002-03-15 06:15 PM

this was one of the most interesting pieces
of poetry ive ever read...you left us with
lots to ponder...i especially liked

"Sometimes it pulls me
against myself,
like taffy.
How far can I stretch
before I break?
How much sewage can I smell
before I retch?"

A very clever way of putting your thoughts
together...i liked this a lot! take care.

amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-15 06:46 PM

Midnite, who wants to be dull? I guess we all would like to stretch it out a little to the bizarre, but not too much. LOL..good one here, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-03-15 07:08 PM

When do you know
you’ve gone too far
to get back to the middle?
Do you even want to go revisit
the same point twice?

very good write...I don't think it's worth going back over..I am learning that you can't ever go back so you must look ahead..and just maybe it will be even better
than it was. *s
By the way..no one's life could ever be more bizarre than mine has been this last year and a half...
Maureen

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-15-2002 07:09 PM).]

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

13 posted 2002-03-15 07:25 PM

Rubberband stretched limits
walks on cliff edge
teasing a viper
there HAS to be an easier way just to enjoy life.
You have some very intriguing and compelling
lines, MidniteSun. Not written simply, but with much poise!
My best to you,
Jeff

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-03-15 07:26 PM

AWWw Kacy~

it can be somethimes cant it?? Peace to you....

I enjoyed this!

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2002-03-15 07:37 PM

Thanks and

to each of you, for always making life's bizarre bazaar more interesting. I wrote this one around midnight last night, in the dark, and at morning's first light, I thought it might be too bizarre to post. I guess it wasn't so bizarre after all. Thanks!

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