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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-14 10:28 PM



Snack Time
By Larry Chadwick


I was a little hungry,
A sort of craving.
Wanted to feed it,
No reason for saving.

It was just a nibble here,
And another nibble there.
I hoped you wouldn’t mind,
And thought you’d gladly share.

So I started with your earlobe,
And then moved on to your neck.
Such a wonderful place to nuzzle,
As I leave a little tiny peck.

But my lips won’t be satisfied,
Until they taste yours too.
It’s just a little craving,
I can only satisfy with you.

March 14, 2002

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-03-14 10:30 PM


Oh gosh...I love it...I love it...now this is my idea of the perfect snack and none fattening too....**big big hugs** Gosh...I have really missed your wonderful talent....

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-03-14 10:33 PM


well that was a pleasant nibble in the end..and I thought it was a late night chocolate chip cookie raid at the pantry..lol
well done!


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3 posted 2002-03-14 10:36 PM


Now that's a snack to savour!!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2002-03-14 10:38 PM


"As I leave a little tiny peck."
Aw, heck! Why only a little peck?????


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5 posted 2002-03-14 10:53 PM


Mmmmm, my favourite snack!
And oh so tasty!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-03-14 10:58 PM


Larry~

LOL I agree with Kacy, why a little peck?? if ya gonna do it, go BIG.... cute little snack here.....
Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-03-14 10:58 PM


Karen,
Did I leave or was it an absence of talent? LOL Thank you so much!

Martin,
Why couldn't it be both? Thanks.

Tracey,
OFTEN! Thanks.

Kacy,
Good grief...the rest is for the feast! Are you still under the influence? LOL

Nancy Lee,
Mine too! Sweet and thanks.

Larry C
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8 posted 2002-03-14 11:00 PM


Lauren,
How about a decadent feast? Will that do? LOL

Bridget Shenachie
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9 posted 2002-03-14 11:41 PM


Sounds like the best option for all us calorie counters.  Glad you brought it forward.

Shenachie

Larry C
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10 posted 2002-03-14 11:46 PM


Shenachie,
Well...I always aim to please! Thanks.

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11 posted 2002-03-14 11:58 PM


You are too much!!
Nothing like a little snack to curb the cravings.  Makes a girl want to indulge herself, providing she can have her cake and eat it too.  LOL~  
Sweet Stuff Larry!

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12 posted 2002-03-15 12:35 PM


heh.
nice.
-Dave

Larry C
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13 posted 2002-03-15 01:12 AM


Lori,
You can at my table! Thanks.

Dave,
A whole new snack bar concept, eh? Thanks.

amigo
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14 posted 2002-03-15 10:54 AM


mmmm...what a yummy snack you got
Enjoy while it is fresh & hot
Ensure that it's never let to rot
I doubt, if it can ever be store-bought...

i hope it's not your snack-time now...

Startime
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15 posted 2002-03-15 11:09 AM


No, sweet man, you did not leave but I haven't been able to be here much lately...working 2 jobs tires me out...I missed reading your talent on a daily basis that is what I meant....Your poems always give me a smile...**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2002-03-15 11:28 AM


HAHA what a nice mid day snack. larry you devil you. This is so charming. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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17 posted 2002-03-15 10:06 PM


I love this Larry! I have missed u while i was gone
Larry C
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18 posted 2002-03-15 10:24 PM


amigo,
I've never had store bought! Thanks.

Karen,
Egg on my face! You know how much I like your work and your posts dear friend. I feel so foolish. But I'll survive. Thank you so much.

floria,
Like you don't enjoy snacks like this! Thanks.

Joanne,
I'm thrilled you're back. And thanks.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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