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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-14 09:36 PM


The hearing of the heart acute
The feeling of the mind astute
Merging with the senses in applaud
Boiling to the surface forces thawed

When the heart can hear the color of his thought
When the skin remembers scents as not yet taught
Merging into single consciousness of melody anew
All the senses to attend in single follow-through

Mirroring of language both the body and the mind
Awareness of the nearness, images to be defined
The self in compliment to flower in wild anticipate
The dressing and the frosting as the entree we await

Copyright Kkh 3/14/02


© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-14 09:40 PM


That's quite a recipe! All of a sudden I'm hungry...

A couple of very clever and beautiful lines here.......

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2 posted 2002-03-14 09:47 PM



You do this very, very well...

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3 posted 2002-03-14 09:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love and passion always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May this magic forever shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-14 10:07 PM


This is so lovely..I really like the way you write poetry...and reply..thank you!
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5 posted 2002-03-14 10:15 PM


Mmmm, very very nicely done!
Enjoyed very much tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-03-14 10:18 PM


like how you weave the meter and the sonnet like lines into this..making the senses speak for themselves..Bravo!!


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7 posted 2002-03-14 10:21 PM


Sensually delicious....I love the whole feel of this poem...Magnificent....A feast fit for the Gods of love....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-03-14 11:20 PM


I humbly thank you...I am learning
ThisDiamond

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