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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-03-14 06:47 PM


Desert Storm
Come
Deliver me from this drought
My flowers parched
Among precarious sands
Elevate me from this dry oblivion
Into lush savannahs
Stilled

© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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1 posted 2002-03-14 08:05 PM


This poem is beautifully worded. It takes me there. Very nicely done!
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2 posted 2002-03-14 08:19 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the garden of your heart forever blossom with flowers and be filled with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-14 09:32 PM


Your Gold really Sparkles in this poem. I love it. It is wonderful.

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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
4 posted 2002-03-20 12:21 PM


(breathes in the fresh savannah air) aaahhhhhhh.. now isn't that better?

God alone is alone. Man is not.

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