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Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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FL, USA

0 posted 2002-03-14 02:42 PM

Love's arrow - Haiku

"till an arrow pierces his liver, like a bird darting into a snare
little knowing it will cost him his life." NIV Proverbs 7:23

I love your writing
Piercing my heart and liver
Tip of love's arrow.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
March 14, 2002

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-03-14 03:47 PM

Sharp arrow, I fear.
Nice one, Newell.
Sandra

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-03-14 04:14 PM

I like your haiku very much, many poets hit me with their love arrows

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-14 04:21 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your wonderful words always hit home to the heart with love and inspiration! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-03-14 04:24 PM

Gory but nice

strbbux
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5 posted 2002-03-14 06:07 PM

OUCH. GOT ME. lol.. nice one Newell. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-03-14 06:33 PM

Thanks, Sandra. Just word play.

((Sandra))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-03-14 06:34 PM

Hi Joanna,

You must be a cat with nine lives. Be careful.

((Joanna))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-03-14 06:35 PM

Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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9 posted 2002-03-14 06:36 PM

Thanks, Interloper.

((Newell))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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10 posted 2002-03-14 06:38 PM

Thanks, floria. Don't worry. The tip was dipped in honey, not poison. Hehe..

((floria))
-newell

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