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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-14 01:39 PM





I reached into
eternity...

Pulled the dream of you
out of the void,
breathed new life
into the hope of one
who drifted just like me.

The "we" was born
beyond pleasure,
soaring into rapture.
The day, the hour of love
would forever be recaptured.

We have walked upon the clouds
of remembrance, buoyed up
by the moments we have shared,
all the heart-whispers that were said,
while sitting on...

~~~the end of our bed~~~



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Martie
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1 posted 2002-03-14 01:57 PM


Ivy Rose
Wonderful!...thank you for sharing this heart tug from the end of the bed.  

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2 posted 2002-03-14 02:35 PM


and heart tug, as well.  Just beautiful!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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3 posted 2002-03-14 02:40 PM


Tender..lovely words ivy..enjoyed.hugs

       ~Victoria~

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-- James Joyce


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4 posted 2002-03-14 02:43 PM


Wonderful thoughts!

((Ivy))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-03-14 04:57 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, it too always warms my heart just thinking of me holding my Gwenevere's hand on the edge of a bed and talking with her and telling her how she means the whole world to me, caressing her soft face! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-14 06:02 PM


IVY you have done it. This is the best I have seen, it is simply lovely. I love it so much. How you put this all together with sweet words and then the sweet ending. Bravo!! good work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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