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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-03-14 10:04 AM

When the river Is so deep,
I can't sleep
whole night
You kept me awaken
When the night
Is so cold
you hold me tight
When the song
was written by you
you always make me
smile
When you take my hand
And sing these words for me
I can't believe
that you wanted
to share this love with me
When the time
Is so right
for us
To be together
When the love Is so true
So true
And It Is true
When the love Is
Enough to lift up
our faith
When the time
Has given us so much
When everything Is.....

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-14-2002 10:05 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-03-14 10:06 AM

VanDana~

'When the song
was written by you
you always make me
smile
When you take my hand
And sing these words for me
I can't believe
that you wanted
to share this love with me'

You've strummed my heartstrings with this piece~
It JUST EXACTLY the way I feel when my sweetheart sings to me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-14 11:09 AM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever hold your everything close to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-03-14 03:29 PM

when the poem is read,
and the reader finds that
the poet has spoken to them,
that is when the poem is life

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-03-14 07:16 PM

Lovely write, vandana!

((vandana))
-newell

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