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0 posted 2002-03-14 12:00 PM



And still she loved him
Her heart just couldn’t let go
There was still so much
She wanted him to know

In her eyes were the whispers
Beginnings of poetry overflow
Visions of her soul
Softly in shimmer glow

Words not of wisdom
(At least she didn’t think so)
Her voicing came from  inner spirit
Lives lived once upon a long ago

Late in the night….. listen
You can hear her sing faint and low
Offering to his subconscious
Memories echo

And still she loved him
Through tears and sorrow
And she would love him until,
Forever’s tomorrow


~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (03-14-2002 12:21 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-14 12:01 PM


Susan,

     I don't know what to say that I haven't already said in my replies a hundred times... I enjoyed, as always

Hugs,
Tara

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     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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2 posted 2002-03-14 12:05 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of promises of love always makes me smile, may true love like this forever fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-14 12:17 PM


oooooo, i like this one.
Well Done!
-Dave

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4 posted 2002-03-14 12:18 PM


Susan - Those memories sure do echo.  Your writing never disappoints.  Nicely done.  

Dave  

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5 posted 2002-03-14 12:22 PM


And she would love him until,
Forever’s tomorrow

Now how romantic was this poem on a scale from 1 to 10, well about an 11 I think Susan.  This is a real keeper, I loved the entire of it.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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6 posted 2002-03-14 02:25 AM


Wow,, greatly said.
wonderful write.
I even have someone i think i will email this to...


Bernie

oh yea and the library tooooo...

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Bernie Slicker

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7 posted 2002-03-14 05:21 AM


Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem with us I really enjoyed the read and i loved the imagery that you managed to cpature with your words

Andrew

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8 posted 2002-03-14 05:23 AM


Beautiful flow Sea...James
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9 posted 2002-03-14 07:06 AM



I have had to build you a new box, my dear, for the treasures you keep penning...the old box is chock full of keepers...

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10 posted 2002-03-14 07:37 AM


SEA~
Beautiful thoughts flowing from your pen~

'Memories echo'

Yes ... over and over again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2002-03-14 07:58 AM


Late in the night….. listen
You can hear her sing faint and low
Offering to his subconscious
Memories echo

I have done this many times.  Thanks, SEA.

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12 posted 2002-03-14 08:03 AM


A love that's true is indeed until 'forever's tomorrow'... Beautiful words, Susan..
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13 posted 2002-03-14 08:44 AM


Yes!
For ever and ever ...
So very well done

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-03-14 08:49 AM


Sea,
Beautiful flow, beautiful write.

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15 posted 2002-03-14 09:43 AM


SEA  as someone on here constantly remarks..your poems are getting better and better..a "look forward to" always to read.
hugss
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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16 posted 2002-03-14 10:11 AM


enjoyed
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17 posted 2002-03-14 10:48 AM


Tara~ you are soooo wonderful, thank you!!

Noah~ thank you sweetie

NCC~ thank you

David~ wow, that is really nice of you to say, thank you

Sharon~ thank you

Bernie~ that makes me smile like this

Zu~ thanks

James~

Sunshine~ I only have about a dozen boxes of yours, thank you very much

Marge~ thank you, thank you, thank you……

Cowboy ~ thank you

Nan~ thank you very much

Interloper~   thank you

Seymour~ thank you!

Maureen~ that is very nice , thank you

Vandana~ always, thank you

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18 posted 2002-03-14 08:16 PM


In her eyes were the whispers
Beginnings of poetry overflow
Visions of her soul
Softly in shimmer glow
==================================

do ya hear the moth sighing?
yes....you do
heres to nothing being left unspoken in rhyme of time.
beautiful turn of phrase in this SEA-girlie.

You never knew what I loved in you,
I dont know what you loved in me ...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be.

Jackson Browne

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19 posted 2002-03-14 08:23 PM


SEA, as usual your words warm my heart. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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20 posted 2002-03-14 08:40 PM


susan,

your writing shines like the gem
you are...this is beautiful sweetie...
full of so much love and beauty. i so
enjoy reading your work and yet another
one of your beautiful pieces goes into
my library. *big smile* take care.

amy

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mean they don't love you with all they have"

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21 posted 2002-03-14 10:33 PM


Janet~ you rock, thank you

Chris~ thank you very much

Amy~ I always love your poetry, thank you!

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