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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not mine to know ever again I read tonight the poems you wrote for him and shook my head as I realized I was jealous of myself and it makes perfect sense it is my due poetic justice has been served |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah gee Duncan! What happened? I hope this isn't about...no, can't be. Big hugs to you tonight! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, Oh.. I hope everything is well for you. Big  to you. And btw, I liked  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-13-2002 11:34 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Awwwwwww, I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, this was powerfully bittersweet! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Your words remind me of someone I miss very much, and this made me cry.....I am keeping this |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Duncan - Enjoyed this sad write. Hanging on to past love is never easy. Dave |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey this feels too sad. Hope all is ok with the romance. I relate to this fully, as I recently happened upon a letter from the man I miss so much, who now claims to never have loved me. Could have fooled me..sheesh.(did in fact) Anyway, heartfelt write. peace. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Justice is a fickle pickle. Enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I read tonight the poems you wrote for him and shook my head as I realized I was jealous of myself not sure..but it seems those were your words you read before realizing...unless I misinterpreted..which I am known to do *s I liked it very much. M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Awwww ... this one likes me very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
duncan - very good. very. justice, jealous of 'yourself.' very good. liked this one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and it makes perfect sense it is my due poetic justice has been served ============================== sometimes for reasons we wont understand till later ... we have to make choices, sometimes whats best for someone else wont be what we are "due" ... but will still be the right thing to do. How we learn from it and grow in that time will be whats "just" your words touch places deep Duncan. You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I felt a shiver of kinship with this poem. If 'justice' be served, let it be in poetic fashion.  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Duncan this was a lovely write, but very sad...i hope that all is goes well with you...sometimes we have to just move on my friend, as hard as it is...and boy is it ever hard. take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes we forget how much we can see of ourselves in "others". I understand this well. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There's nothing that I can say to top all of the replies above. All convey my thoughts on this particular work in one way or another. well done, Duncan, well done... ~Tier |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan in sadness you pour out your soul. floria Floria |
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