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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-03-13 05:45 PM





A Wee Lad

He darted around my bushes
And scampered about the lawn.
Thinking I had not seen him
He was wrong.

Then he strolled down the path
Whistling a lively tune,
And with a skip of his feet
Kicked the twigs that were strewn.

I quietly followed a few steps behind.
Tiptoeing so softly not making a sound.
As he hid behind flowers I snatched a quick look.
And saw that his cheeks were quite pink and so round.

As I glanced round the corner
And his hat I did see,
It was pointed and bright
As bright as could be.

He had a pipe in his mouth
A corncob I think.
As he darted about
He gave me a wink.

He was so tiny
Yet he was just grand.
Just where had he come from
I could not understand.

Then peeking about
His feet sticking out.
With his little shoes pointed
Now there was no doubt.

How lucky was I
To have visit me.
A sprightly Leprechaun
As sweet as could be.


Floria

[This message has been edited by strbbux (03-13-2002 05:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-13 05:48 PM






(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, methinks you have the luck of the Irish in ya blood! (kiss on cheek) This one made me smile as all your lovely words do, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-13 05:52 PM


Oh so cute Floria..loved it..he must have been looking for the green beer ha..hugs

           ~Victoria

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3 posted 2002-03-13 05:57 PM


hehehehehe...I'm so glad my disguise fooled ya....see you tonight!!!!!
This one is fun!!

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4 posted 2002-03-13 06:06 PM


Noah thanks, you are always kind and I love your greenery, nice for the holidays. floria

Victoria, thank you, green beer? I hate beer. LOL,, but I will make some just for you. floria

Baladeer, you didnt fool me a bit. I heard you reciting one of your ballads as you ran around my bushes, hahaha,,ya little devil. tonight then. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-13 07:06 PM


Floria~


A cute write..... enjoyed very much!





Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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6 posted 2002-03-13 07:44 PM


Ah Floria...this is sooo cute!
How lucky you are to have spotted him!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-03-13 07:44 PM


Floria~
How spritely - delightly~
You're such a clever little imp~

I believe - I believe - I believe~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2002-03-13 08:02 PM


floria, this is delightful. I could see you trying to keep us and watch the little fella. Such a sweet write. Thanks!

((floria))
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9 posted 2002-03-13 08:37 PM


floria,
How long have you been keeping this secrest? I want to see one! Next time call me, okay? Nice job.

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10 posted 2002-03-13 08:59 PM


Hello Floria

I thought this was gorgeous and so well written.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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11 posted 2002-03-13 09:33 PM


Thank you Laurena and love your little elf. floria

Thank you Nancy for your kind words. glad you got  a giggle out of it. floria

Marge thank you, I am happy you are a believer, because then that means I am not nuts. LOL floria

Newell, thank you, I am so glad you got a chuckle out of this. floria

Larry, Hey sure, I will give you a call next time the little guy shows up. floria

Sue thank you kindly for your reply. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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12 posted 2002-03-13 10:23 PM


Floria - Ah, the wee folk are out and about are they? Must keep my eyes wide open just in case. Loved this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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13 posted 2002-03-13 10:38 PM


aww i loved this floria! happy early st patricks day!
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14 posted 2002-03-13 11:33 PM


Really cute, Floria...
Happy St. Patrick's Day

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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15 posted 2002-03-13 11:39 PM


Floria - Very nice.  Next time he comes around make sure to get a picture with him.lol

Dave

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16 posted 2002-03-14 06:40 PM


Thanks nightshade truly appreciate your reply. floria

thanks Rosepetal. hope all is great with you. floria

Hi Lyra thanks for the sweetie pie, I love him. floria

Thanks Dave, sure will do that, sneak up on the little guy LOL. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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