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Through My Window- Titia's Challenge

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RosePetal
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0 posted 03-13-2002 05:23 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RosePetal

Through my window, I see the trees of the woods
The seclusion makes me miss my old neighborhood
I see my truck resting in the drive way
As the grass glistens on this hot, humid day

There is no pavement, just long, dirt roads
I keep staring out this window in zombie mode
Oh look, here comes the mail lady
Everday she hits my mailbox cause she drives so crazy

There's not much more to see outside this window
When it's dark out, the stars shine beautifully though
What else do I see? my reflection on the glass
I must go water my yard, and it's a tiring task




[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-13-2002 10:08 PM).]

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1 posted 03-13-2002 05:26 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) Awwwwwwww, I know moving is a big step, but I know soon you will get used to your surroundings once you settle down then everything will seem so magical! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, I dream of seeing the stars with you this summer so so much! (kisses) I love you, my sweet Joanna!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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2 posted 03-13-2002 05:27 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

i would love being alone in the country..i like my solace..enjoyed joanna..hugss ..
feel free to email me sometime hon..

               ~Vic
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3 posted 03-13-2002 05:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RosePetal,
There is so much more to see, if you use your imagination. Enjoyed
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4 posted 03-13-2002 05:56 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

Hi Joanna, I love this, it made me feel as I wanted to be there, I love being alone and I would love to be out somewhere all alone, things are a bit hectic for me right now. anyway, good to see your smiling face, and I hope you like your new place. (except for the mail lady) LOL floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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Ah yes, moving can be a tiring task altogether, i have done this a few times when i was a young lad.  Well, maybe when you become more accostomed to your surroundings, you will see the real beauties of your new environment. Good luck in your new home!

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador


a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

[This message has been edited by Hypnosis (03-13-2002 10:10 PM).]

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6 posted 03-13-2002 10:12 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Awwwww Joanna~

there is a world out there to see, especially in the country....LOL there is country in FL?? tell me where....I just moved from MN and all I have seen, are rows of houses and the beach that had rocks...LOL I just got here bout a month and 1/2 ago, give or take....so i am still exploring....


Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Hi Joanna!  Titia's Challenge has been well met in this very visual piece.  Hope you are getting all settled in to your new place.  You sure were missed...
and not just by Noah! LOL
....Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 03-13-2002 11:06 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Joanna, get your little self back down here to God's country!!
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9 posted 03-13-2002 11:43 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

I remember when I moved *shudders* Lovely poem here Joanna. Very lovely indeed!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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10 posted 03-15-2002 04:07 AM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

From someone who has moved more times then I can remember.... I enjoy your style.... I loved the poem. Well done, my friend. SMoothly written and shaped. From a friend... Thank you, too, for your friendship.

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

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11 posted 03-15-2002 06:33 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

at least you get a mail lady  *s...  I enjoyed the view...I am sure it will grow in time...my window didn't have much to see yet either.


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12 posted 03-18-2002 02:02 AM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman

I love to see all those different views from everyone's window.
Liked it a lot.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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Love it.
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14 posted 03-19-2002 09:56 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

This got me thinking about what I see there, I like my geraniums that sit at the edge of the walkway in their own little corner of the sun.  Maybe I will rise to the challenge.  
Really nice picture outside your window RP~
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