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Pharmaceutical Request For Doctor Love
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Pharmaceutical Request For Doctor Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Dear Doctor Love, I need a cure for pain that will not go away it clings around my heart and soul I feel no peace at end of day. And please, Doctor, do send it soon some nights I feel I'm fading fast there must be respite of some kind for surely pain's not meant to last. I visualize my better life and happiness which in me grows I dream and plan, tisn't for naught else why would silken winds still blow? The ocean yet does call to me and still I dance upon the sand yet painful tears will flow unchecked and I cannot quite understand. A potion then, I beg of you which takes my memories in hand and doles them out in smallest bits only as much as I can stand. And when I'm cured (of course you can) I'll be my regular old self the girl who was left hung to dry discarded on her empty shelf. Though now that matters somewhat less in face of losses even worse but tell me Doctor, do you think someone out there has caused me cursed? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I am going to have to study and consult on this one Sandra. However, since you are my nurse, and I love you to death, I will find a cure and post it soon  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well. . . I'm not a Doctor. . . but, I would say no. . . besides. . . curses are hard to do. . . great job Sandra. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, this is so sad but I know deep down with all my heart you will find all your heart desires soon and Doctor Love has the perfect perscription for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sometimes when you look around and see others who dreams are coming true..you sort of wonder dont you?? enjoyed Sandra..hugss ~Vic |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Anyone curses you Sandra and they will have me to deal with. LOL.. great write. floria Floria |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, This is so deeply sad, and so intensely written. I can more than relate in so many ways. And no, my dear, you are not cursed, although I understand the feeling, as I have felt that way many times. You are a beautiful woman, inside and out, and I know there is a sweet destiny waiting for you that you have not found yet. This time will pass, and you will heal, and find your dream. We all love you... Love, Elise |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A potion then, I beg of you which takes my memories in hand and doles them out in smallest bits only as much as I can stand. Sandra - aww sweet poetess - may the good doctor fly to your side and replace such sadness with a smile. So well written it brings tears to my eyes wanting to ease your pain. Take heart!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon, A nice write even though sad. Enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear catalinamoon. My girl lay down and just relax Tell me your story and the facts And I will work a cure true To fix the heart and pain in you There’s many that come see me dear Today it’s you, “Come wipe that tear” I’ve here a potion I will try To make your blues just say goodbye It’s not a pill or needle but some words of good advice Cos girl I must have seen this pain, much more than once or twice You’ve got to open up your heart and let the world you see With loneliness and bitterness you’ll then no longer be Most feel lonely in their hearts; true love is hard to hold But sitting with a crying soul will leave you feeling cold So wake up to the morning and say this world’s for me And doctor love with potion, will set your sorrow free Be thankful first for morning, which gives a brand new start Be thankful that you’re healthy to play your daily part Look unto those less lucky, who would swap their world for yours Be thankful to your hand of fate and all your heart filled chores You have the gift of writing; extend your thoughts to love Then all your wishes, all your dreams, may come from up above I enjoyed the write, all the best with Love and life. Sincerely Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sandra I just feel like it wasn't your time...but surely your time will be soon...it must...it will...I believe true love will find all that believe in it...keep believing...James |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sometimes the Rx must be taken for several days....do as the good doctor says, you're in wonderful hands, you know... |
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