Mushy Marsha's challenge - communication breakdown

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Mushy Marsha's challenge - communication breakdown

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-13 02:21 PM

OK, I just found it. So I'm late ... what's new

~*~
you never listen
communication breakdown
I no longer speak

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-13-2002 02:30 PM).]

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-03-13 02:24 PM

Interloper...Couldn't have been said better. GREAT WRITING!!! ***Ivy Rose

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

2 posted 2002-03-13 02:30 PM

Yes...simply said about a very complicated and heartbreaking state for a relationship.

enjoyed your thoughtful words as usual.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-03-13 02:30 PM

What about,

I never listened
communication breakdown
You no longer speak.

?

Just a thought, LOL...

((Interloper))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-13 02:48 PM

(big hugggsssss) This is so sad but beautifully said, sweet friend, this is a fabulous reply to the challenge, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-13 03:57 PM

Bob darling boy now that is an answer to the challenge, this is utterly wonderful. I’m really impressed by this exquisite piece of writing.

Frightfully sad though, isn’t it, a communication breakdown.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-03-13 04:04 PM

challenge well met indeed..nicely done

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

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