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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-13 11:58 AM



Through Time’s Eternity

Though time can try to hide the truth of this
I’ll remember knowing true love’s kiss
If I should somehow lose the touch of you
No more to see you my whole life through
I know that though my soul might ache
And my poor heart will almost break
There within the burning depths a flame
A fragment of true love remains the same

Although time can’t fathom when or where
I’ll know that some day you’ll be there
If ever I should forget I touched a dream
That true love wasn’t by my soul unseen
Wherever I wander, if it were far from you
Then may I recall I had a love quite true
My heart will hold the gift you are to me
A wonder and a blessing shining eternally

If time one day denies that you loved me
I’ll remember the touch of love so clearly
If I should lose the wonder that I feel
Or ponder if this love was ever really real
Then lose my soul in a cloud of doubt
While my heart seeks for any way out
May I always know you heart lies in me
A haven of truth and love’s certainty

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-03-13 12:19 PM


Very beautiful Marsha..always an aura about a woman in love..shines from within..hugss

           ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-03-13 12:21 PM


Marsha, no room for doubt in this piece. True love shines through. Really touching and sentimental. Cheryl
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-03-13 12:28 PM


I loved it before and I love it now

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4 posted 2002-03-13 12:33 PM


sis,

this is beautiful and oh how you've
touched a raw nerve with this one...
but thank you. i needed to read this
today. this is just purely gorgeous
work from one of the most beautiful
hearts i've ever known. take care of
yourself. talk to you soon!

love you.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

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5 posted 2002-03-13 01:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this true love forever shine in your heart and may the afterglow of loves true kiss forever have your heart singing happily! (kis son cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-13 01:24 PM


Once soul-touched, that delictable scar is something to be treasured,
and the pain not to be felt, but to be endured with smiles.

I’ll know that some day you’ll be there
If ever I should forget I touched a dream

are endearing images of the depth of what once was, yet still is.

Love your writing style, Marsha, and the wording methods you use!
Jeff

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7 posted 2002-03-13 01:25 PM


If we had love for a moment, it can live with us forever. So well done.

Nan

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8 posted 2002-03-13 01:53 PM


Marsha, darling girl. You write verybeautiful thoughts. And your poetry is wonderful healing tonic to my soul. Sweeter honey has never been made by bees or people. you are truly a rare gift of God's Love. Thank you for just being here.

((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-03-13 02:13 PM


Marsha...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN POEM OF LOVE!!!
Yes, even lost love, is never really lost to us.  Memories are stored in the heart, in the soul.   ***Ivy Rose

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10 posted 2002-03-15 11:28 AM


Victoria darling girl thank you so much I think it’s an aura of completeness. Or being beloved, because each of us carries in us real love, it’s just some bury it under layers. Being loved and loving in return gives us back out souls.
Thank you muchly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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11 posted 2002-03-15 11:42 AM


Victoria darling girl thank you so much I think it’s an aura of completeness. Or being beloved, because each of us carries in us real love, it’s just some bury it under layers. Being loved and loving in return gives us back out souls.
Thank you muchly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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12 posted 2002-03-15 11:45 AM


Cheryl darling girl Oh I truly thank you for taking the time to read this little offering of mine. THANK YOU warm smiles


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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13 posted 2002-03-15 11:46 AM


Bob darling boy thank you dear one, but this isn’t a repost, unless my writing is getting so samey that one merges into another. I have done several on a similar theme I think. There you see you’ve got me doing it now, is this one I’ve rewritten without knowing it. I’ll have to check.

Anyway thank you always


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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14 posted 2002-03-15 12:04 PM


Amy darling lil sis  thank you so very very much you are one of the angels in my life, and this is a story of how love enriches our souls. I know you know this well


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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15 posted 2002-03-15 12:05 PM


Noah darling boy thank you so very much Love shines on us both darling boy, you’ll have all your dreams come true and I mine


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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16 posted 2002-03-15 12:05 PM


Jeff darling boy thank you so much you are far too nice to me, I don’t deserve your praise but will hold it to me as a warm blanket. THANK YOU  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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17 posted 2002-03-15 12:11 PM


Nan darling girl thank you so much it mean a lot to me that YOU take the time to read and reply to me, Thank you always for your inspiration.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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18 posted 2002-03-15 12:12 PM


Newell darling boy Oh thank you so very much you really are much too kind to me. I’m a writer of very minor skill, negligible talent, and little effort. You are on the other hand are a good writer


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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19 posted 2002-03-15 12:13 PM


Ivy Rose darling girl thank you so, that is so nice of you and I really do appreciate it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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