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Choking the Words
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Choking the Words |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Choking the Words Am I to suffocate while waiting, my words gasping for air, held back by the terror of constriction? Yet the tears aren't stifled, spilling out, with each cough relinquished, from eyes that can't see the future. I am unable to speak as emotions trickle down reduced to fingertip touching, releasing the emotion within. Only .....five ........more ..........days ..............to go. M |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is very nicely penned, Maureen. Time solves everything. Patience is a wonderful virtue.  ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dearest Newell..I am trying to hold onto each breath awaiting the Drs. visit next Monday...until then I am to be off all medications..so literally I am having trouble breathing..patience is not my virtue at least not at the moment *s Thanks hugss M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this you portray it to pure perfection. I could literally hear you gasping for breath. Outstanding writing as always you show how well you can write   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Where are they when you need one right? Hope you feel better real soon..If hes like my allergist was you will be waiting an hour or two before you get in his office..hugss ~Vic |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Maureen, your poetry is very powerful and the desperation comes through so clearly. I do hope the days pass quickly until you can get your medication again. Cheryl |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
5 more days until ...? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Five days can be so long. I would rather it be five days until your heart's desire were to be there, than to be a Dr appointment. But breathe deeply and peacefully, and listen to the winds, for songs of healing are coming your way today. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ I'm holding my breath for you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so sad but wonderfully said, sweet friend, hang in there, dearest friend, we are all here for you if you ever need someone to talk to you and comfort you until the time you visit the doctor! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marsha, still gasping...but trying to read a bit too .. thank you hugss M Victoria, well if Ihave to wait that ong they wil have to probably be giving me oxygen by then *s or picking me upoff the floor...or this sound will scare allothers away... Cheryl, thank you..I tried to do that...been coughing for months now with no one able to suggest a cure....now I only have to wait 'til Monday, I hope. lunatic 5 more days until ...Monday...and maybe then I will find some relief.. Midnitesun "Five days can be so long. I would rather it be five days until your heart's desire were to be there, than to be a Dr appointment." well that would be wonderful wouldn't it *s. thank you for the lovely thought *s it maybe inspirational for a write in a bit. *s hugss M Marge ..don't hold it too long *s.. or youmay be choking like me. hugss Marge and as you can see I can breathe just enough to pen my thoughts s Noah...I'm hanging, well I feel like I am hanging anyway..*s I'll make it through this one step at a time, if need be. Thanks for your kind offer and concern. hugss M |
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