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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-13 09:26 AM



I can’t stop thinking
mind pregnant with ideas
how do I reach you
how can I best show my love
I’ll be observant
learn to earn and keep your love
I must be patient
I know you will show me how
you are worth the wait
your love the goal of my life

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-13 09:39 AM


Bob darling boy Oh WOW when YOU write you really write, this is utterly utterly fabulous.

Krissy will be over the moon with this. She said to me where was hers, and said she was far more deserving of one. This is gorgeous she’ll be along later to reply, she was so late yesterday that she didn’t get here.

This really is utterly utterly fabulous writing YOU are indeed a writer. Thank you for this one


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-03-13 09:41 AM


What a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

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3 posted 2002-03-13 10:22 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know Krissy will love this, you are a delight and inspiration to us all! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-13 12:10 PM


AWWWWW

what a beautiful letter..you do this soooo well interloper..

~~
Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 12:11 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-03-13 12:37 PM


this is beautiful Bob! you do love
letters very well...nice flow and format.
take care.

amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2002-03-13 02:18 PM


Whew!!! Interloper when you write a poem of love, you write a poem of love.  This is beautiful and I am sure Krissy will love it.

***Ivy Rose

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7 posted 2002-03-13 02:28 PM


Bob, you are indeed the master of love letters. And I am honored to have the privledge to learn from you. As you know, my heart is also bursting with love that needs to be expressed. So, friend, thank you for your wonderful lessons. I know Krissy will adore this You are a wonderful man. Please keep the honey flowing. .

((Bob))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Krissy
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8 posted 2002-03-13 06:31 PM


Bob thank you so very much, how do I reply to this beauty

To learn to love me
Simply lay your heart there
Let my kisses
Sink into you
Filling your soul
With my essence
Moving through you in
Whispers of desire
Down paths of heated fire
To the place of
Eternal joy

Call my soul to you
Sing to me songs of
Loves hope
Drop dews of quietude
In my seas of questions
Touch my heart with
Fingertips dipped in moonbeams
Sprinkle star dusted dreams
In my eyes
Feed me love’s truth


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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9 posted 2002-03-13 06:35 PM


...Nobody does this better...Nobody!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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