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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-03-13 07:48 AM

Metamorphous

New has come
To touch the old
Where thoughts and
Buttercups unfold.
Now shadows
In odd display
Turn buttercups away.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-03-13 08:03 AM

You just made 20 or less SOOOO MUCH MORE!!!!!
This is deep me Stinky...but then so is the poets inkwell

very cool write Sy-babes...we will have to see what we can do to chase those shadows away

*ww*

mothy me

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-13 08:07 AM

JM,
We would have to bring the buttercups back.
Winkiewinkie

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-03-13 08:18 AM

I loooove buttercups... held under the chin...

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-03-13 08:28 AM

B E A U T I F U L~

I love buttercups...

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2002-03-13 08:32 AM

A wonderful poem, very easy and enjoyable to read thank you for sharing

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-03-13 08:57 AM

Nan,
They go along with

Greeneyes,
And they love you.

Marchalzu,
Thank you for the read and comment.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-13 09:02 AM

Sy, this is wonderful!
Amazing how much can be said
in twenty words or less.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-03-13 09:06 AM

Seymour darling boy this is outstanding writing, as always you excel at whatever you write. And how can you do so at 20 or less, I can’t even write a comment at 20 or less! Oh well c’est la vie, that is why my replies take up so much space I suppose. Would you like shorter replies? Chance, as they say, would be a fine thing.

This is wonderful, it truly is excellent writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-03-13 09:07 AM

Thank you Nancy

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-03-13 09:11 AM

Mushy,
I love what you write.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-03-13 09:11 AM

Sy, this is a gr8 piece

Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-03-13 09:14 AM

Interloper,
I thank you and my hat thanks you

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

13 posted 2002-03-13 09:18 AM

Absolute and Resolute
thoughts of man's unwind
Open Randy's thought of whim
finding therein thoughts of time

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2002-03-13 09:20 AM

Sunshine,
Good morning sunshine.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

15 posted 2002-03-13 04:12 PM

with buttercups ... come butterflies

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2002-03-13 04:21 PM

You brought back such a fond memory for me with this one, as we wove them into crowns and wore them in our hair (Jenna and I, when we were kids), and for that memory you get yourself a great big

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-03-13 04:24 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love buttercups so much too, just as I love almost every flower, you describe nature's beauty so beautifully! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mutington
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since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

18 posted 2002-03-13 04:47 PM

Sometimes less is best, and your lovely poems proves it!

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S MEADOWS

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2002-03-13 05:16 PM

JM,
A few buttercup, a few butterflies, what a lovely day.

Mysteria,

one back at ya.

Mutingham,
Sweet comment.

Thank you Noah.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

20 posted 2002-03-13 06:17 PM

Seymour great job. you sure did it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

21 posted 2002-03-13 07:04 PM

Very nice, Sy.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2002-03-13 07:10 PM

Seymour~
Jeezzzzzzzz, from the title, I thought you were peeking into my wallet !

Now those buttercupped thoughts are worth their weight in gold~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2002-03-13 11:51 PM

Floria,

Sandra,
Thank you.

Marge,
Love ya too.

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