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Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-03-12 11:14 PM

Greeneyes
&
Donna

With eloquence and grace
her words do impart
In sisterhood of words
we're all sisters of heart.

Look high above the clouds
share with me your sorrow
Least there be a doubt
in strength, a better tomorrow.

Share with me your joys
that which brings you light
Let me gaze into your soul
through emotions that you write.

The foundation of your heart
has remained tried and true
A great friendship, from the start
has never left me blue.

Let me revel in your spirit
allow me to feel your pain
as I hear your whispered words
falling like the gentle rain.

Upon this earth voices softly call
from sea to sea we need only listen
Hand in hand we will stand tall
Your pain and sorrow never a burden.

When the waves become to rough
in the storm, I will be your harbor
Rest upon my shores in peace
where serenity lasts forevermore.

Rest your weary head upon the sands
feel the power and emotion
There surrounding you
in sisterhood and devotion.

This common thread held
A bonding beyond compare
A beating heart as one
That in spirit we poets share.

A sisterhood of faith
you never need to doubt
A rare and special grace
let me never do without.

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-12-2002 11:16 PM).]

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-03-12 11:16 PM

Girls,
Totally Awesome! I love this and it's friendship defined.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-12 11:26 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you two are wonderful sisters of beautiful poetry to us all and always fill your hearts with song and inspiration! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-13 12:51 PM

Let me revel in your spirit
allow me to feel your pain
as I hear your whispered words
falling like the gentle rain.

Upon this earth voices softly call
from sea to sea we need only listen
Hand in hand we will stand tall
Your pain and sorrow never a burden.
====================================

Lauren rhymed again!!!!!

You two this is a WONDERFUL tribute to friendship found thru poetry.
Donna...your gift of cadence is rubbing off on her

(but we wont ever let her stop those rambles)

way cool you two!!! :rainbow

You never knew what I loved in you,
I dont know what you loved in me ...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be.

Jackson Browne

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2002-03-13 07:18 AM

Wow .... look at what I have been missing!!
Excellent work, the words hold a warmth so true.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-03-13 07:57 AM

Writing with Lauren is a wonderful experience. She gives such inspiration so effortlessly. There is a special bond through words as we all know, and a sharing among the women through hearts. Thanks to all and JM, I don't EVER want her to stop her rambles as they are BEAUTIFUL!
Hugs to all,
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-13-2002 07:58 AM).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2002-03-13 08:38 AM

What a wonderful collaberation individually the parts are works of beauty but together they become so much more special. Thank you for sharing such a great poem with us

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-03-13 09:13 AM

Lauren and Donna darling girls this is utterly utterly gorgeous, thank you for this delicious and wonderful beauty of this. This is utterly outstanding

Individually you are fabulous writers, together you are awesome, this truly is a duet of hearts and spirits. Utterly utterly wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-03-13 09:18 AM

Very Pretty Lauren and Donna..enjoyed reading your sweet words...hugss

~Victoria

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

9 posted 2002-03-13 07:47 PM

Fantastic! I love it. The Passions Sisterhood is the best! This duet flows with love and friendship.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-03-13 07:53 PM

SweetSistersOfTheHeart~

This is perfectly lovely~
A melding of two kindred poetic spirits~

'With eloquence and grace
her words do impart
In sisterhood of words
we're all sisters of heart.

'A sisterhood of faith
you never need to doubt
A rare and special grace
let me never do without.'

Gals, this is BEAUTIFUL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

11 posted 2002-03-13 07:59 PM

Wonderful! Just Wonderful!

((Lauren and Donna))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

12 posted 2002-03-13 08:20 PM

Beautiful in every way!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-03-13 09:00 PM

This is wonderful. You work well together.
Sandra

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-03-13 09:38 PM

Hey Guys & Gals,

This was a tremendous write with Donna and we both had a lot of fun, hopefully bringing forth a message of Sisterhood, among poets, and the 'sisterhood' we have found in each other..as friends...Thank you Donna for your constant friendship in unconditional manner and your strong support thru the years....Love you my friend and sister.....
love to you all....

thank you for responding....HUGSSS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-14-2002 08:15 AM).]

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2002-03-13 09:38 PM

A beautiful duet from two of our lovely poets...what more could Passions ask for?

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-03-13 09:40 PM

Sunshine~

You snuck in there on me....

thank you for your kind thoughts and warm heart....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 09:40 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

17 posted 2002-03-13 09:45 PM

"This common thread held
A bonding beyond compare
A beating heart as one
That in spirit we poets share.

A sisterhood of faith
you never need to doubt
A rare and special grace
let me never do without."

These verses were fantastic. Great job you guys did here. lovely work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

18 posted 2002-03-15 06:12 AM

Wonderful verses individually and when put together a powerful poem
depicting the sisterhood through poetry and heart. A fine collaboration from two of passions poets. Great job gals.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2002-03-15 04:59 PM

Again a very humble thank you to all. This was a fun write. Lauren,

unconditional....always. Hugs to all in poetry land, and thank you...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

20 posted 2002-03-15 06:03 PM

Lauren and Donna

this was beautiful!! a wonderful tribute
you two have created to sisterhood and
friendship...such lovely words from the
heart and it's such a beautiful thing
for us all to witness.

take care.
amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

21 posted 2002-03-15 11:12 PM

Take two beautiful hearts, put them together and what do you get? A lovely collaboration you two, just wonderfully done, and such perfect flow to your tribute to sisterhood. Well done both of you!

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

22 posted 2002-03-16 04:07 PM

buried in the back pages as I was reading I found this little masterpiece showing the glory of the sisterhood shared at Passions and between two friends. This was an incredible duet between two sisters of words, and hearts. Thumbs up to both of you.

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