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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-12 10:14 PM


I watch you sleep
without a care...
enjoying the trust
your rest implies

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-12 10:22 PM


Wonderful!!  Love it Larry!
These are fun short writes to do too, eh?
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-03-12 10:25 PM


i like this Larry! I have a nice queen sized bed all to myself, but unfortunately I go through many sleepless nights!

sweet dreams

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3 posted 2002-03-12 10:30 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too have a comfortable bed but it takes me a long time to fall asleep a lot of nights because of all the thoughts on my mind! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-12 10:33 PM


Night night, sleep tight
Don’t let the bed bugs bite!!!!

That’s what my grandfather always used to say to me. Yep, the whole family’s a little strange

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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5 posted 2002-03-12 10:48 PM


Larry~

What a wonderful quality when you can watch someone sleep....for me that would be peaceful....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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6 posted 2002-03-12 10:59 PM


Larry darling boy shall I just say something short in reply? Like this is good writing? No of course not, because it’s not good writing at all, it’s stunningly fabulous writing. YOU are a superb writer my friend.

Sleep softly in poetic slumber in your poetic bed
Sleep gentle poet while rhyme scampers in your head
Drift into the arms of Morpheus dream your night away
Tomorrow comes swiftly you’ll wake to a brand new day


Absolutely excellent writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-03-12 11:06 PM


Larry - This short one says it all about love and trust.  Well done.

Dave

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8 posted 2002-03-13 01:15 AM


Nancy Lee,
Turns out they are a blast! Who knew? Thanks.

Joanne,
Your turn cometh!! I'm positive. Patience sweetie. And thanks.

Noah,
Can I ever relate! Thanks.

Tracey,
I'm in trouble if that's strange. Cause I got it from my folks and used it on my kids. OOPS! Thanks.

Lauren,
How right you are! Thanks.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

Larry C
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9 posted 2002-03-13 01:16 AM


Mushy,
Sweetie...I loved that! Awesome and thank you so much.

Dave,
How unusual for me! Thanks.

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