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All That Jazz (Escrivan's Challenge)
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All That Jazz (Escrivan's Challenge) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smooth the sax Get the facts Thick with blues Primal ooze Take me there Double dare Rock and roll Rhythm's soul Get the beat Grind the heat All my smile Dance awhile Yeah Baby! Do Dis Ting...  Copyright Kkh 3/12/02 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen! This looks like it was fun to do! Now, I must go and find the challenge! ~Enjoyed, hugs Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a very groovy and soothing poem! (kiss on cheek) You've got the music in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the beat short and neat but what I meant to hit was take any word like fit try it out in different ways keep that word, try not to sway. your poem has rhythm like a jazz tune makes me want to reach for the moon but the exercise was to use one word plug it each line, like it's n'er been heard |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I know my dear Ecrivan, but nobody can do it like you can... I just figured I'ld go dancin... Sorry, I promise to do dis ting right this time. ThisDiamond [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-13-2002 12:06 AM).] |
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