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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-03-12 10:02 PM

Write for me a love song
Expressing words of love so true
Together we'll make the hit parade
With songs of love by me and you

Serenade me with a melody
Play a tune so soft and sweet
The words of your unchained melody
Are liable to sweep me off my feet

Sing to me in harmony
Of this love we share so grand
Walk with me beneath the moonlight
As the waves crash onto the sand

Play for me a symphony
With words and music so divine
Through each and every chorus
Our love will eternally shine

I'll dedicate my life to you
As you lift me high above
Our music taking us higher
Upon the wings of love

Suetang

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-12 10:12 PM

This is lovely Sue! I wish I could...but I'm always off key!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-12 10:13 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever shower you with serenades and sing love to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-12 10:14 PM

im sure you write very good love songs too sue, ha..loved it..hugs

~Vic

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-03-12 10:19 PM

Sue,
Speaking of style. You've got it! I love this.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-03-13 12:25 PM

Sue: Very pretty poem and has a nice cadence to it!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-03-14 12:05 PM

Loved it! The rhyme was lovely as was the theme.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2002-03-14 03:20 AM

Wow.

What a poem. So... happy. And encouraging. And romantic.

I'd love to have a deep reply, but all I'd got is your word choice and rhyme and flow were beautiful.

~ Titus

Will I ever forget what happened today?

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

8 posted 2002-03-14 04:08 AM

This is very nice. Actually, writing a love song is very difficult. I've been trying for some time now and it always comes out wrong. But it's a nice thought.

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