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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-12 09:35 PM

K! Long Live Queen K!

I am most assuredly one of those who reign
A scepter in this hand, and nothing’s quite the same
For even if I am careful, I’ll surely get a bop
For this thing I’m wielding, shall surely hit my top!

I am very splendidly a being of admire
When I am so careful in my very fine attire
Here’s a run in my stocking, from tip of toe on up!
And a goodly chip has found it’s way onto my coffee cup!

Just today I crowned my best,
As life this morn was for my test!
First I started at foot and leg, a bruising just to show
I can glow in anything, from tippie top to toe!

I collected bruises, just to know I’m here
One upon my forearm, and one upon my rear!
One found my thigh all right, another on my … chest,
Today I crowned my everyplace, a queen quite at her best!

I’m the Queen of Klutz, and my kingdom is my grace!
I am quite the lucky one, I didn’t land upon my face!

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-03-12 09:45 PM

Kari darling sister of heart and keeper of dreams truth, I don’t believe you darling heart, never in a million years would you be the queen of klutz. This is just divine darling heart, the flow is excellent and the rhyme scheme perfect.

As always excellent writing, do I love it? Yes I do. Utterly utterly love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-12-2002 10:37 PM).]

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

2 posted 2002-03-12 09:45 PM

If you're the Queen, then I'm one of the Royal Brats (Princesses)

Thanks for the read, but I'm sorry that you're so... klutzy?

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-12 09:59 PM

Gee, I always thought I was such a klutz!
Now after reading this you are quite welcome to the title.

You seem much more deserving than I.

Fun read Karilea...much enjoyed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-12 10:49 PM

(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...I would definitely be a prince of Klutz, I too can be quite clumsy sometimes! (smiles) You are so much fun to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

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5 posted 2002-03-12 10:53 PM

Karilea - Very amusing write. I used to be a klutz when I was a kid. I would constantly stub my toes. I really hated that. Even now, when I am on the computer, I will slip and my head will hit the monitor and I'll be knocked out cold for a few minutes.lol

Dave

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6 posted 2002-03-12 11:17 PM

Hey! That's my title...queen K... heh

Actually - I'm clumsy too...Drinks take one look at me and fall over...

hugs you

K

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

7 posted 2002-03-12 11:39 PM

NO WAY, QUEEN K! The most gracious lady among us must have had an off day. Your graciousness is unfailing. Methinks you tripped over your own perfection. Sorry about the bruises.

Shenachie

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-03-12 11:54 PM

HeyQueenie~

I've a gallop in my stocking
The finish line is 'nigh
I've run from the 'Toe' snickering
Here comes my well-bruised thigh~

Couldn't resist ! !
Been around the Klutz Track a time or two myself, Queenie~

*snickers* *chortles* n' *snorts*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-03-13 01:06 AM

You tripping over your charm again are you? Geez Louise, how does one get a bruise on their chest anyway? I have been trying to recreate in my mind such a scenario and it fails me

Well at least when you slipped on your wazoo,
it sure brought out the humor in you

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-03-13 01:15 AM

Did I ever tell you the story of my trip down the stairs? Wear those bruises as a crown...you earned it!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-03-13 05:36 AM

Well I hope you are ok, if that is a recent fall....I sure didn't expect the poem to be about bruising...but a nice write despite

hugssss
M

Midnitesun

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Gaia

12 posted 2002-03-13 12:07 PM

I found many levels of fun in this one, Sunshine. Remember the phrase,
"Let's go trippin" ??? Do we both take it literally as well as figuratively some days? Good humor...more tasty than a sweet ice cream treat.

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-03-13 12:30 PM

{GRINNING}

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA

14 posted 2002-03-13 01:28 PM

I've fallen flat on my face a time or two, and on my rear once or twice. Ah well, nice to know I'm not alone! Well written and gave me a smile.

Nan

Martie

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15 posted 2002-03-13 02:00 PM

Karilea

The humor in this is very refreshing to one who has fallen on top of a vase of flowers and shattered everything, including her thoughts of grace. Hugs!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2002-03-13 05:23 PM

my I apply as Jester to this Queen?? For I have truly raised the level of "klutz" to a humor that none will ever see again. . .

this got me laughing. . . really good. . . I needed this one today Sunshine. . . thanks. . .

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strbbux
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Posts 3859

17 posted 2002-03-13 06:27 PM

Gee whiz Sunshine, You should have married my husband, then you guys could have been King and Queen of klutz....haha, good one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

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Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-03-13 09:35 PM

And I DO NOT believe that YOU are HER...

Enjoyed this...cute....

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-03-13 09:43 PM

Sunshine~

No way I take first honors in this....somedays I feel as though I need a pillow to ease the fall...LOL good write....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-14-2002 08:33 AM).]

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