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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2002-03-12 05:38 PM


I lay my head upon my pillow
And I dream of you
You haunt my every thought
And honestly, I do not care
If having you means being haunted
Then lace me with the cobwebs of you laughter
Fill me with the ghost of your smile
Let your touch lie in the shadows of my heart
Because here you are welcome
Here, in my arms, you belong
I lay my head upon my pillow
And I dream of you
I know peace as I slumber
And when I wake and have you near

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

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1 posted 2002-03-12 05:41 PM


This is such a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed the read thank you for sharing it with us.

Andrew

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2 posted 2002-03-12 06:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me sigh happily, may you forever dream sweet dreams with your love and wake up with love close to your heart in bliss! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-15 04:22 PM


jk,

hmmm this was a beautiful poem...you
struck a chord with me and brought some
memories up for me...thank you for sharing
my friend!

take care.
amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

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4 posted 2002-03-15 05:11 PM


JK oh my you need more responses on this lovely poem.
"If having you means being haunted
Then lace me with the cobwebs of you laughter
Fill me with the ghost of your smile"

Love your words so much. very creative. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-15 06:15 PM


If having you means being haunted
Then lace me with the cobwebs of you laughter
Fill me with the ghost of your smile
Let your touch lie in the shadows of my heart
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beautiful lines.....
Connie

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