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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-12 03:16 PM


(For my love Joanna)

Lips Of A Rose
By: Noah Eaton
3/12/02

Lips of a rose
Brush down my skin
Consuming passion
Touching brightly
Flaring
With scarlet flame
Seducing me
Embracing
Heavenly love

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-12-2002 03:16 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-12 04:11 PM


Noah,
    
    I like Short and sweet. I'm sure Joanna will love it

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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2 posted 2002-03-12 06:07 PM


Short, sweet and romantic. I hope she enjoys
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3 posted 2002-03-12 06:11 PM


Noah darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful writing. Joanna I’m sure will be smiling in her heart with the gift of this. Absolutely excellent writing from you. Short and filled with wondrous love


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-03-12 06:12 PM


Noah darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful writing. Joanna I’m sure will be smiling in her heart with the gift of this. Absolutely excellent writing from you. Short and filled with wondrous love


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-03-12 06:16 PM


Says alot in just a few words..nicely done Noah...hugss

                ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-03-12 06:55 PM


She'll like this one..
Good write

Bernie

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7 posted 2002-03-12 07:25 PM


Lovely Noah!! Chris

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8 posted 2002-03-12 07:37 PM



How pretty!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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9 posted 2002-03-12 08:29 PM


Very very nicely done Noah!
I'm sure Joanna will love it...
sometimes fewer words say is just as well.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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10 posted 2002-03-12 08:40 PM


short, sweet and wonderful.  You say so much with so few words.  She will love it.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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11 posted 2002-03-12 08:41 PM


Short and wonderful. Just right!

((Noah))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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12 posted 2002-03-12 09:51 PM


Oh yes, I definitely love this! I never thought I could mean so much to someone! Thank u
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13 posted 2002-03-12 09:54 PM


Noah, I cannot wait to read your words to her AFTER you meet.
Sandra

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14 posted 2002-03-12 10:00 PM


How well you honor of the love that sustains you. A knight to the lady Joanna. ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2002-03-12 10:49 PM


Noah - Very good.  Heck, I'd take the lips of a dandelion at this point.lol

Dave

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16 posted 2002-03-12 11:02 PM


Nice writing Noah...James
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