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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you alone may grant all the wishes of my life if only you would Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is soooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, I too wish that she too will will this and together all your wishes and dreams will come true forever! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Ask, and you shall receive But, be aware of what you wish for For, it's gonna come true... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
whisper your wishes I will make them all come true with my love, to you   |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful thoughts, Bob. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Interloper darling boy this is outstanding writing, and so full of love, this is such a special and magical wonder. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Beautiful writing dreamy thoughts, I love this one, it’s excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
come foward my star wanting to be where you are wishes do come true |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
tell me your wishes I shall wave my magic wand making them come true ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
if only if only if only... sigh... Interloper, your poem touches the heart of this reader... *~coco*~ [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-12-2002 12:30 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've sighed "if only" for so long... but never so beautifully. *S* Excellent! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* ...if only...do dreams ever really come true....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A very well written piece you have here! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ You can take the least amount of words, and make each one stand with emotion and so much meaning....lovely your words always.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I love if only's ... Sincerely wonderful ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a wonderful poem, I like the topic of unrequited love although it is such a saddening thing to see someone in that situation. Thankyou for sharing this poem with us Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - oh sigh, sigh, sigh. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
If wishes come true, May I grant all yours to you? And mine to me, too? |
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