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CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2002-03-12 02:09 AM

Hold me
in surrender
all of me
today
and
forever...

Listen
intuitively
to the whispering
of gentle sighs
that echo
from within me
just how much
I adore
only you...

Discard
any doubt
or twinges
of jealousy
and
trust
what is real
in this melody
of love
I sing...

Embrace
the essence
of who
I really am
rather than
frame me
into an
identity
of someone
from your
fantasies...

Simply
love me
as pure as
color white
not shaded
in tones
of ecru
be genuine
and always
true...

Soar
with me
beyond these clouds
of darkened yesterdays
farther than
we've ever gone
together
side by side
we'll glide
towards the trail
of shooting stars
where
forever and a day
we shall remain
cradled in
the lullaby
of our
eternal love...
*~Coco~*
1434

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-12 02:12 AM

Your poem is great, I relate to it much. The title totally lost me. lol

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2002-03-12 02:15 AM

awwwww Duncan you're a sweetie and as4the title well it's code language...
the digits 1434 = i(1) love(4) you(3) more(4)...

SmilesNhugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-12-2002 02:18 AM).]

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

3 posted 2002-03-12 02:49 AM

"Discard
any doubt
or twinges
of jealousy
and
trust
what is real
in this melody
of love
I sing..."

Those are some of the most reassuring words I could ever imagine to hear uttered from a lover's lips.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2002-03-12 03:17 AM

Thank you so much4your sweet reply BeOwulf

Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-03-12 08:45 AM

Listen
intuitively
to the whispering
of gentle sighs
that echo
from within me
just how much
I adore
only you...
===========================
we'll glide
towards the trail
of shooting stars
where
forever and a day
we shall remain
cradled in
the lullaby
of our
eternal love...
====================================

Who could resist this invitation to heaven,
HEY YOU!!! its about time we get to read you for a change

only you would have the code of love

waaay cool cool.
this is an delicate ethereal beauty Coco..a *sigh* in the stars.
make your wish sweet poetess.
heart-hugs to you!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-12 08:49 AM

"Soar
with me
beyond these clouds
of darkened yesterdays
farther than
we've ever gone
together
side by side
we'll glide
towards the trail
of shooting stars
where
forever and a day
we shall remain
cradled in
the lullaby
of our
eternal love..."

YAY!!! Awwwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too wish this love to forever sing in your heart! (smiles) May you forever be cradled in love's heavens, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank youn for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-03-12 08:55 AM

CocoBaci,
A wonderful write and a delight to read.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-03-12 09:39 AM

cradled in
the lullaby
of our
eternal love...
==============
I absolutely love this phrase! What an image it conjurs in my mind!
~*~
cradled in our love
an eternal lullaby
settles upon us
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-03-12 11:40 AM

How lovely, Coco. Nice to read your words again.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-03-12 11:44 AM

just lovely...*s so romantic

hugssss

M

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2002-03-12 11:46 AM

Coco

I love this...every word so soft and tender in sentiment and emotional depth....very happy to read your poetry again

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2002-03-12 11:53 AM

Sweetie Janet, I am thrilled2say the least at your reply upon reading this one poem of which well ya know the rest me thinx gurl since you seem2know the rhythm of which true love in a heart does beat... Hugs2uALWAYS

Mistletoe(NOAH), rite back at ya and MUAHHHH on cheeks SweetPoetFriend...

SeymourSweetie, I gotta tell ya my heart jumped a beat2see that you took a peak and read this cuz I admire your poetry bunches my PoetryBuddy and a big TEDDYHUGgoesOut2u...

Interloper, me likez what you wrote in reply dearFriend, and I gotta hand it to ya cuz it left me speechless4a moment in drift of thought whereby in dreamz I dance upon the breeze of yesterdays and sail 2wards the glistening trail of new beginnings in tomorrows... BearHugz2u

Cat(SANDRA), dearOne you're a doll ya know that huh and I truly do appreciate your taking a look at this whispered poem I wrote 2day...

NakedThoughts, ya know how much I like that id name u got there

and well ya know the rest cuz me sure appreciates your kindness and smiles in reply dearPoetFriend....

Sea (((MUAHHHHHHHH))) hugs2u sweetie and gosh I just luv coming by you here and as always ya know I luv ya bunches PoetFriend...

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-12-2002 11:57 AM).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2002-03-12 12:22 PM

What a delicate beauty you've penned. The shorter lines and your unique style works really well with this

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

14 posted 2002-03-12 07:26 PM

Coco...a woman with true style...enjoyed you as always...helen

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2002-03-12 08:01 PM

Coco, I love the way you write and this one is exceptional. *Also love the code*
~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

16 posted 2002-03-12 08:25 PM

Melissa, I'm really happy2read that you've enjoyed this poem and I thank you soooooooooo bearrrrrrry much4your kind comments2me PoetFriend...

1Slick((Helen)), a reply such as the one you have given me2day has surfaced a smile from the depths of my heart and I gotta tell ya sweetie 'your' poetry 'always' is a treat4me2read and I thank you DearPoetFriend...

Enchantress((Nancy)), I'm touched that u like the code language I embedded in this poem as it has a special meaning2me and I wanted2share it with you special PoetFriends and I also wish2thank you for your kindness in reply2me...

*~coco~*

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

17 posted 2002-03-12 11:49 PM

CocoBaci,

I'm so glad I stopped in, I like this very much

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

18 posted 2002-03-13 07:11 AM

coco~

sweet friend, this is absolutely a stunning
write! your emotion in this brought tears
to my eyes...it's just so beautiful!

i loved the entire piece but i particularly
enjoyed this following stanza:

Embrace
the essence
of who
I really am
rather than
frame me
into an
identity
of someone
from your
fantasies...

Simply gorgeous writing my friend.
take care.
Amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

19 posted 2002-03-13 07:29 AM

Yes, nice to see you back. And with such a good poem. Enjoyed.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

20 posted 2002-03-13 11:32 AM

A good title, made me
think, after reading
the poem, of time...

1434...

2:34 in the afternoon,
a delightful time to
fly...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

21 posted 2002-03-13 03:05 PM

Oh heavy sighhhhhhhhhhh - this was so absolutely romantic. (I have a friend who speaks to her boyfriend in code too, so cute)

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

22 posted 2002-03-14 11:54 AM

RosePetals25, hiya sweetie itz terrific this morning4me2see you have passed thru these pages and read this poem I've shared with all of you and my heart hugz ya PoetFriend...

Aimster, sweetieeeeeeeeeeee gosh you touched upon the exact verse that I too share with you in terms of particular appreciation of and I'm also tickled pink that you dear friend have shared with me such kindness in your reply ((SmilesNhugs2uAmy)) ...

MirrorMan, thank you so very much PoetFriend for stopping in and letting me know you enjoyed cuz you write such exquisite poetry and it has much meaning2me 2read from you that you've enjoyed this poem hugs2uSweetie...

BlackSun (soleil noir), itz nice2meet you PoetFriend and your comments2me2day got me bursting in smiles and I thank you4your sweet reply and btw thaz a cool id name you got there...

Mysteria, ((( big hugz2uSweetie ))) and well ya know the rest of what I'm thinking and feeling when I see you've come by a page I share sooooooooo MUAHHHHH on cheekz dearPoetFriend...

*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-14-2002 11:55 AM).]

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