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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-11 09:29 PM

Against desires I remain bound
by bond of one of two.
Within my heart in love once found
for dearest, thine I do.

Mine eyes absorb thy every sway
as down thy path refrain.
Scattered mem'ries wilt not display
thy sadness or thy pain.

Decree this love I do wish give
to thee from heart and soul.
A wish of one to have and live
as bells of vows do toll.

One love of thee in life and death
and mome’ of when and then.
One heart of soul that sheds a breath
from chest with love therein.

For wilt thee give thy heart to me
as mine arms doth enfold.
As words of song I sing to thee
of visions we wilt hold.

As thee doth rest in softest light
with eyes of sleep in dream.
I give to thine a kiss this night
when once we wade the stream.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-11 09:36 PM

(smiles) You are a modern talented poet with the heart of a classical romantic, sweet friend, I just love the archaic voice you associate with your work, this is outstanding! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-03-11 09:49 PM

Such tribute to the beloved done with mastery...I the student. Thanks. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-11 09:55 PM

Enchanting Barry....just wonderful !!

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-03-11 10:13 PM

For wilt thee give thy heart to me
as mine arms doth enfold.
As words of song I sing to thee
of visions we wilt hold.

I love your courtly romantic poems, Barry.
You are so good at these.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-11 10:44 PM

Magnus darling boy this is utterly outstanding, you are an absolute master at writing these delightful beautiful poems. I love it as always.

You really are an excellent writer

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-03-11 11:13 PM

Barry~

WOW....this is stunning, soft, tender and full of romance....refreshing to read....as always....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2002-03-11 11:44 PM

A lovely and romantic read

enjoyed.

Maree

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

8 posted 2002-03-11 11:46 PM

Magnus - This is truly a fine, romantic piece. Really liked the style as well. Nicely done.

Dave

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