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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-03-11 03:55 PM


Close
nostrils flared
trembling hands
hearts racing
lingering embrace
flushed cheeks
eyes closed

beads flowing
down curves


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-11 04:22 PM


An eyelash of your touch
whispers discreetly
brushing thoughts
of body paint
upon a waiting canvas
of alabaster and lace
~Vic

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-11-2002 04:33 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-03-11 04:24 PM


Gee, you guys are really good at this!  

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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3 posted 2002-03-11 04:24 PM


Barry,

   I like this Very erotic, at least to my eye. Enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2002-03-11 04:42 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is beautifully erotic, sweet friend, you are wonderful at these challenges, keep them coming, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-11 06:18 PM


Barry this was hot. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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6 posted 2002-03-11 07:38 PM


So much passion
Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-03-11 07:41 PM



Oh, my...

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8 posted 2002-03-11 07:42 PM


Hi Barry

This was great and very well done.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-03-11 07:43 PM



What a sensual beauty this is!
Yep, you're the king alright

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2002-03-11 07:54 PM


Vic...oh Vic??

Think this could be a duet of 20 or less
times two???  Excellent response...love it!!

Mysteria...YEP...I guess,  and Vic is giving
me some serious competition...

Tara,  I tried hard to keep it in the ball
park...on this playing field...so tempting
to let it rip...

Noah,  yep yep yep...thanx..

Floria,  warm,  ok,,  just warm!!

Walker...thank you,  I tried to put some
sensuality and passion in it...musta done it.

KJ...Getting warm up north??

Suetang...thank you very much...glad you
enjoyed..

Melissa...I am pleased I have your vote,
though I am sure there are many others
who do this very very well too...

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11 posted 2002-03-11 09:13 PM


OOOh La La!
ThisDiamond

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12 posted 2002-03-11 09:34 PM


This Diamond....THANK YOU!  and you are
welcome...glad you enjoyed..

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13 posted 2002-03-11 09:52 PM


...Oh, yes!...

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

Magnus
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14 posted 2002-03-11 09:53 PM


Nancy....OH Yes???  Guess that means major
sigh from up north...huh??

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15 posted 2002-03-12 12:08 PM


WOW what a whisper of After.....


lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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16 posted 2002-03-12 12:16 PM


ooooooo
and with this one, I say good night all

very nice Magnus

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17 posted 2002-03-12 09:30 AM


enjoyed......
Startime
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18 posted 2002-03-12 04:51 PM


*sigh* sensually passionate in a new style...I love it...Wonderful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

J. K. Mitchell
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19 posted 2002-03-12 05:42 PM


I smile.
I sigh.
I wish for more.

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

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