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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-10 10:14 PM



Like
a sleeping
dragon,
love
is awakened
descending slowly,
an ever glowing
breath
consuming
the heart with
its fearsome

~~~passion~~~



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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautiful vision of passion, sweet friend, may the love in your heart forever glow brightly with the flame of trust and faithfulness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is an excellent challenge reply, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-03-10 10:21 PM


...Wonderful !!...

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:23 PM


Fabulous writing Ivy...James
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-03-10 10:33 PM


Yes!!!!!  Perfect!!!!!  and Encore!!!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-03-10 10:47 PM


Yes! You met the challenge perfectly!

((Ivy))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2002-03-10 11:19 PM


oh I like this one
the imagery is fantastic with so few words! great job!

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-03-11 07:12 PM


I agree totally with SEA and the others...

Very well done Ivy....I am envious....

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