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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:42 PM



Two words
whatever order
you place em
temperature
you bake em
put em in a
bottle and
shake em
maybe someday
you'll finally
take em
or leave em.........Mark Coburn

© Copyright 2002 Mark Coburn - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2002-03-10 09:44 PM


LOL Mark. Good write. And thank you for the kind reply on my last poem.
Sandra

Mark Coburn
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2 posted 2002-03-10 09:51 PM


your very much welcome and thanx for your response Sandra...how was the sea on this day?
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-03-10 10:20 PM


Well said. LOL, can't love'm, can't leave'm, can't seem to write anything without'm.
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-03-10 10:22 PM


Now I like this one!!!  Right to the point, and with a bit of humor!!  Great write!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-03-10 10:24 PM


This is good!  This is very very good!  Hugs.

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

Mark Coburn
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6 posted 2002-03-11 01:37 AM


this is cool...I do like to get a bit of humour going within my work....definitely reading this tonight in balt. at funks coffee house....thanx my friends
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