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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:22 PM


~ Communication ~
Communication Breakdown challenge response

Communication skills are the key
Without them you’ll n'er be free
If you can’t comprehend this fact
And you lack the necessary tact
You’ll not be able to take the spin
Or understand what is hidden within

Breakdown the barriers there inside
Reveal all with naught to hide
Strip off the mask to unveil you
Bare your soul show it clean and true
There’s no point in concealing this
Or are you scared of betrayals kiss

Communication giving you me
Take up the challenge of destiny
If you show all that you really are
Then you will travel wide and far
But if you don’t communicate
You’ll be left to a loser’s fate

Speak to me now communicate
Break out of silence don’t be late
Give to yourself speak your word
Enunciate make sure you’re heard
No time like now use your voice
It’s there for you. This is your choice

Marsha





To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-10-2002 09:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-10 09:26 PM


*grins* Love it!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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2 posted 2002-03-10 09:27 PM


This is great Marsha...
Right back atcha! ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-03-10 09:56 PM


Marsha, this ia a wonderful subject, wonderfully written, as always. Your poetry continues to be outstanding and just gets better! And I love your wisdom, darling girl. You are wonderful. You are spectacular. Fire of my heart.

Please see my full response in the poem, "My Soul" posted on a new thread. And you know that I love you, Mushy, darling girl.

((Marsha))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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4 posted 2002-03-12 12:43 PM


Enunciate?
Prevaricate!
Deliberate,
Obfusticate,
Malapropistic
Gibberism
Prognosticates
Prestidigitation.
Communicate?
Who,
Me?

-Dave

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5 posted 2002-03-12 08:37 AM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I too believe to communicate is the ost important thing in life, and I consider myself a very lucky person because I was born with Asperger's Syndrome, a high form of autism, and may patients never learn to speak with it, but I am so happy that I can speak! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I think later I'm going to try your fabulous challenge too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-12 08:53 AM


Fabulous challenge love,and fantastically met.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-03-12 09:05 AM


Marsha, Marsha, Marsha,

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8 posted 2002-03-12 09:33 AM


I hear you

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