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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:13 PM


I was his angel,
his darling angel.
He said he loved me...

I was his angel,
his darling angel.
He said he'd never hurt me...

"It wasn't me" was his motto
I was too blind to see
Didn't want to think he'd
Actually lie to me.

Now I'm a "freaky girl"
With love for another...
Shaggy's words ring oh so true
When I hear that song I still think of you

I was his angel,
his darling angel.
Now I belong to another.
"Angel" by Shaggy was the song I shared with the first guy I loved.

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:26 PM


very well done!!! Now I gotta find that challenge
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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:33 PM




YAY!!! WAY TO GO!!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet Rhonda, I too love Shaggy a lot, especially his "Angel" cover! (kiss on cheek) You did a wonderful job with this, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-11 07:04 PM


I much enjoyed this.  Now up to the top so more readers can have a look.

Michael

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Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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4 posted 2002-03-11 07:17 PM


Well done Rhonda....you met the challenge very well!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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