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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:03 PM


Pink electric tingles
White and wispy jingles
Pulsing palms of deep surrender
Finger tips so light and tender

Currents blue emerge
Jade and mint converge
Healing in the contact
Loving in the feedback

Purple filters down
Emerald oceans drown
Tickling edges light
Holding on so tight

Lavender to lilt
Honeysuckle wilt
Supple on the bend
Loving gifts to tend

Copyright Kkh 3/10/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-11-2002 01:08 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-10 09:14 PM


I love the flow of this one! You made it work so well!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:40 PM


Wonderful write, this is...full of sensations and colors!  Much enjoyed feasting my eyes on it!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


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3 posted 2002-03-10 11:07 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, such colors and breathtaking imagery fills your words always, this is a true gem of beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-10 11:25 PM


ThisDiamond...A New Englander like me!!!! I really loved your style of writing. It was refreshing and new.  Very skillfully done.

***Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2002-03-10 11:30 PM


reads like the painting of a masterpiece
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6 posted 2002-03-11 07:11 AM



This IS a diamond in a diadem...IWIHWT...

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-03-11 01:07 PM


Thank you everyone.  You are all such a gentle pool of inspiration... have enjoyed my writing so much more in sharing it with all of you. ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-03-11 07:15 PM


Surely WE are not the inspiration...YOU are..

Nicely done...very nicely done!!!

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