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A Touch (20 or less #2)
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A Touch (20 or less #2) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A Touch.. Lingering softness continuously sensual rising goosebumps trailing endlessly passionately flowing following curves leaving only sighs as touch ends... love begins... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am seriously liking these 20 or less of yours  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of passion always bring a smile to my face! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always a pleasure to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....thank you....sad to say....you will have to wait till 2morrow for Nr. 3.... I am beginning to enjoy the 20 or less..is fun to write... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You did well, enjoyed |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey Barry...Wanna trade days? Sounds like you're having a great one! lol |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, well, I can wait they are fun aren't they? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah....thanx....jump in sometime with your own...I know you will do well.... Sy...thanx...glad you liked this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan....sure...why not...I can still write can't I....Well, maybe not....Hope your's gets better.... Sue....YES, these are fun....a shame I waited so long before I wrote one....lots of fun...YEPPER! OK Sue...here is a freebie.... Eyes gleaming stare reflected beauty passionate vision gateway to the soul [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-10-2002 01:18 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, Now you need to know...this is my all time favorite from you!!! Wooohooo. I'm really liking this a bunch. Could even feel it. Wow. Good job.  Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cool! thanks |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Larry C. thanx much....this is FUN .... Where have I been all this time....Hiding??? You do pretty fair at this yourself... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - thanks for the memories of a touch such as this. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this 20 or under is seriously excellent writing from you. Don’t stop you do it brilliantly. Wonderful writing as always Excellent writing here really excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
There ya go Barry! And you hesitated to try...you are getting very very good at this! Hugs. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
S ! m g i l n |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris...you are very welcome...Thank You! Mushy...gee, I don't know...I kinda like this...so many ways it can go.. Nancy...very pleased you like it! KJ...Smiling back at yu! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I find this very touching... How well you portray the event ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This Diamond...thank you...I "feel" this is the way that I would love to be touched... or touch... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You're the king of "Twenty or less" And this is beautiful!  It made me sigh~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Melissa....THANK YOU! I consider that a very nice complement....I enjoyed it, and will continue to do so in the future... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...That's what I call poetic excellence. You bring us from the sensual to the passionate...all in a few short lines. ****Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this style too. It goes well with you. Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I bet you could do it in five Great job on this Magnus.The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I taste your sweet bouquet savoring moonlight morsels within delicacies of night fragrant with sweet fruit and bonbons of you ~Wench Victoria |
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