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I Would Wait (tanka)
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I Would Wait (tanka) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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I Would Wait For you I would wait A hundred lifetimes to pass To just hold you close So I could whisper Quietly promise to you My heart and undying love "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara, this is one of your very best! I LOVE this  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan - Awww thank you I'm glad you like Dave went to the movies, and he said wait for me, I'll be home..and he inspired me, which he usually does  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beauitufl, sweet friend, that is so sweet of him to say such things to you like that, may you and him meet soon and forever travel through true loves dreams together! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aawww, that's so sweet! I love reading your work Tara! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*sighs* this is beautiful!  Love inspires your pen to new heights Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A hundred lifetimes??? Now, that's patience, Tara! Got any to spare? LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Magnifique!.....Excellente! Bravo...well done Tara.... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - You are just so wonderful Thank you for your sweet words.Skyfire - Thank you! I'm happy you enjoy Melissa - Dave makes it more than easy Thank you.Duncan - LOL, If I have to wait a 100 lifetimes I'll need all the patience I have.. find your own!  Just kidding I'll share hehe.vandana - Thank you (stick a smilie here) I'm glad you stoppped in. Barry - Thank you (I would insert a smilie here.. but I ran out LOL) I'm glad you liked it. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-10-2002 09:15 PM).] |
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